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Mu.Ka.Su (MuKathha SUlikarathoda short form ila ithu....Mun Kathai Surukkam....kathaiya padichitu vara reactionlaam titleye expect pannapdaathu okva..:D )

Story so far...First partla Ram and Uma are leading a happy married life..Ramoda love letter paathu Uma kindal panra. That triggers the flashback where Ram narrates how he fell in love with Uma. Second partla Ramuku ponnu paaka poranga avanga family. Ponnu sidelenthu further news varama proceedings abrupta stop aguthu. Aduthu ennaachu?? here we go..



Ram, Siddharth, Arun and Amal are all sitting in Pizza hut. It was Arun's treat.

"Exxxcuse me.." calls Amal at the waiter.

"Can you get me another bottle of sauce..this one is over"

"dei..sauce kekanumna saatharanama keta poratha..kaila kathiyoda kekara..pizza vetta kathi kudutha irukaravangalalam vetiruvaan polarukay..keezha vaida" endru athatinaan Arun

"machi..kathi kaati kaasu keta thaan thappu..sauce keta koodava"

Peals of laughter followed.

"Onnu note paneengalada..namma tablela evlo livelya sirichitu satham poatutu irukom..micha perlaam paren..evlo silenta soagama irukaangannu"

"dei..avangalam..sontha kaasula saapdrangada..inga billu katra Arun munjiya paarunga..athey pola than iruku"

"maganay intha mokkaikagavay un billa neeye kattu.."

After the customary "bye" "take care"s when they began to leave..Siddarth called out for Ram.

"Unkita konjam pesanum.."

"Solu machi"

Sid waited till everyone else had left...

"Saw your mail yesterday about that Uma. Again??? Are you nuts Ram??..ithenna cinema nenachitrukia? paakamaly love athu ithunu olaritrukka..what rubbish"

"Hey..relax Sid. Yen ivlo tension.."

"Pinna..nee panra kaariyamelaam madathanama iruku. Uma nu oruthi chatroomla ivar pudichaaram..apdiye friend aagi..ipo love pannavum aarambichitaaram.. By the way, athu oru real charactera ila is anyone pulling your leg by creating a dummy profile, antha debateay inum clear aagala. Arent you aware of how many fakes are floating around in Net? This could very well be a fraudster for all you know"

"Quite possible. But that person has to be a damn good actor for maintaining such an act for.. close to an year now. Its not that i dint had my doubts. Infact ava kooda fonela first time pesinapo kooda doubt clear aagala. But athey fone chats became lengthier and at one point fonela charge theeruthaynu chargerla poatu arattai adikara alavuku vanthapo thaan i got convinced that it has to be a real person. And the kind of personal details shared was too real to be a fake da...ipo oru novel padikara vaiyen..athula vara lead character unaku pudikarathillaya..athu polathaanda ithuvum"

"dei fool....ithu un lifeda..not just any story...Avlo pesara aalu ava en foto share panala"

"well..naan kooda thaan anupala en fotova"

"Aarrgh...i still cant believe someone can fall for a person whom he hasnt even seen and not even sure whether that person is real or fake. Seri..ivlo pesara aalu..ponnu paaka en pona..veetla solla vendi thaana..intha mathiri enaku oru virtual lover iruka..avala naan internetlaye.. password maathi kalyanam panika porennu"

"Veetla compulsion..so had to go..paatha ponnu was also not bad..but enaku iva Uma va iruka koodathaanu thaan apovum thonithay ozhia..couldnt wipe her thoughts from my mind da..."

"u proposed to this Uma person?"

"inumilada...aana want to meet her before that"

"enamoda..i hope u dont get into any trouble because of this..all the best..."

"Thanks machaan"

****************************

"Ennada...foneum kaiyuma romba nerama suthitruntha..interviewva" endraan Amal.

"Amaada..oruthan fone pesina porumay..udanay interview ilaati kadalai..vera optionay iruka kudatha" endru sirithavaaray koorinaan Ram.

"Sirichitay pesaratha paatha positive news pola teriuthu.."

"dei cashewnut..konjam mooditu iru..oata vaaya vachitu ularitrukaatha..yes..interview thaan..from TCS...and i think its almost through. Salary negotiationukaga waiting"

"Sooper..treat treat..."

"Parakaavatti..wait pannu...mudhalla offer letter varattum"

"Hey..waitaminute...nee kadisia ponnu paathiye..antha ponnu kuda ithey company thana...AaHaa..now i know why you were so keen on this offer"

"Mannagatti..there are 10 branches for that office each with 3k people atleast and 6 of them are in chennai..what are the odds.."

"Intha Alaipayuthay calculationskkelam naan varala..enamopa..nalla iruntha seri"


The last day at office was a pretty emotional day for Ram. Having spent a good part of his 10 year career at various branches of the same office, he was as familiar to the staff next only to the company logo. There were lot of group foto sessions sprinkled with emotional moments. After surrendering his card, he collected all his belongings and left that office for the final time. Since he had to relocate to chennai for his new job, he vacated his house also on the same day. He loaded all his stuff on Amal's car and headed off to chennai. Being a real chum, Amal came all the way to his house and even helped in unpacking. After he made Ram promise that he would soon look for a suitable position for him in the new office, Amal took leave of him.

First day at new office. Ram briskly walked into the lobby and flashes his best smile at the cute rerceptionist..

"Hi..my name is Ram..i am here to meet Vijay.."

"Please wait for sometime i will let him know" pat came the reply like some pre recorded message and she went on with her work as if the lobby was empty.

"Adakkivasi maams..first day..first impression..dont screw up..relax" Ram said to himself. He took a deep breath and sat relaxed on the chair. The very moment Priya came out of the lift right in front of him..she was looking stunning in her pink salwar that it simply took his breath away. "what are the odds dude..now u tell me.." He could hear Amal's voice mocking him on his mind. "Kann ethirla figure irukarachay kandavana pathi yosikariyeda fool" spat his own mind voice. Before he could even react, Priya left hurriedly outside...without even noticing him. He went near the receptionist to enquire about her. Without even opening her mouth, that lady gave one "can't-u-wait-till-i-call-you" stare which silenced him.

He called Amal.

"Maams..avala pathenda"

"dei..serious escalation oditruku inga..etho pulla mudhal naal opice poitu fone panuthaynu edutha..avala pathen poria pathengara...anga enna ayutha boojaya nadakuthu"

"adai arivuketa Amal..naan sonathu Priyava..naan kadisia paaka ponene antha ponnu. Nee sonna mathiri thaanda aidchi. She is in the same office as mine"

"soooper...nee nadathu...seri..evening call panni sollu enna aachunu.."

(thodarum)

Comments

savitha said…
First!!!

Gilseeee!!You pichings!! 2 episodes pulli pettings, this episode kolam veyyings!!Theivamey!!(I am still a bit confused, though:P).

But, your flow of story telling is awesome,Gils!! The way you connct the main storyline with relevant everyday occurances....You please keep writing!!:)

Pls post the next episode sooner!!
savitha said…
By the way,ippo Priya, Uma, lover ellam oruthanga thaano??:P

Gils convergence theorem!!
Unknown said…
im aint reading this.. will read all of it together when u finish the series..
HaRy!! said…
naan inga newngoooo... yeah i hav seen quite a couple of my frnds doing virtual chat and yes love as well...enga poi mudiyumoo... just brought those memories.... adutha episode la ena nadukum ?
cya around
RamNarayanS said…
Enakku ennamO fact more, fiction less maadhiri thOnudhu. :-) Indha episodela avvalavaa time shifting / confusion illai, so flow is fine.

Gils, vaaram oru muraiyaavadhu update pOdunga.
Unknown said…
//Password maathi kalyanam pannika poren// and //Intha Alaipayuthay calculationskkelam naan varala//

Too much. Hahaaaha :) room pottu yosippengalo? :P Punch-o-punchu!!! :D *kuruvu kumbudufies*
Ratzzz said…
"avala pathen poria pathengara" - literally lmao for this..

kalakre gils.. sema story build up...

ezhuthinde irunga.. sema story...
Unknown said…
Aana, indha kadhaila kozhappam orey missings.. Typical Gilssu story madri illiye! :|
Annam said…
Nalla pokuthu gilsu..........ungalukkulla oru story write ivlo naalu olinjindu irunthurikirar:)
gils said…
//Gilseeee!!You pichings!! 2 episodes pulli pettings, this episode kolam veyyings!!//

avvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv...epdiruntha aathivasi..ipdiaaiteengalay :D :D


//Theivamey!!(I am still a bit confused, though:P). //

inummaa??!!!!
gils said…
//But, your flow of story telling is awesome,Gils!! The way you connct the main storyline with relevant everyday occurances.//

nanri nanri

//By the way,ippo Priya, Uma, lover ellam oruthanga thaano??:P

Gils convergence theorem!!//

hehehee...convergence theoremoda necessary condition solitel..sufficiency adutha partla naan solren
gils said…
//im aint reading this.. will read all of it together when u finish the series../

avvvvvvvvvvvvv...athana partaiyum mudichitu ungaluku mail panuven..neenga para parava padichi kament podanumaakum :)
gils said…
/naan inga newngoooo... yeah i hav seen quite a couple of my frnds doing virtual chat and yes love as well...enga poi mudiyumoo... just brought those memories.... adutha episode la ena nadukum ?
cya around/

hey hary..welgum welgum :) adutha episodla enna nadakum...enakay teriathu :D :D inum yosikavay ila :D
gils said…
/Enakku ennamO fact more, fiction less maadhiri thOnudhu. :-) Indha episodela avvalavaa time shifting / confusion illai, so flow is fin//

The precision of any fiction is a reflection of the facts presented. As such, while truth may sometimes be
stranger than fiction, fiction must always have a foundation of truth :D :D naan solaleenga...james rollins telling in Map of Bones :D
gils said…
//Too much. Hahaaaha :) room pottu yosippengalo? :P Punch-o-punchu!!! :D *kuruvu kumbudufies*/

i love tht kuruvi foto :)semma cutea iruku :)
gils said…
/"avala pathen poria pathengara" - literally lmao for this..

kalakre gils.. sema story build up...

ezhuthinde irunga.. sema story./

hehehe...nanri nanri :)
gils said…
//Aana, indha kadhaila kozhappam orey missings.. Typical Gilssu story madri illiye! :|//

typical gils?? apdinum ethachum iruka??
gils said…
//Nalla pokuthu gilsu..........ungalukkulla oru story write ivlo naalu olinjindu irunthurikirar:)/

pikaali sonna sarithaan :D apeelaay kedayathu
Pallavi said…
Only if 80% of the post was not in Tamil, I would have enjoyed reading it even more.. but whatever I cud understand from the English bits it does make for a cool read! I would look forward to coming back to read the next part. Can that have more of English than Tamil?
gils said…
welgum pallavi :) sure..wl try more of tht in coming series :)
Shruti said…
my stupid feeds dint show up new updates and i missed JOK :(
Never mind, summa kuthu madhippa i pottufied ur blog n saw 2 new posts!
atleast cant u inform? X-(

I was much thelinjufied in this part! kadaila epdi twist irundhalum, the mail part s, RAM IS MARRIED 2 UMA!!
and frst part la avan avlo feelings twrds lover, must be priya! :D
Eppudi, naangalum yosipomla

>>Hary
Hey, u came here aft me givin u blog link? Awesom dude :P
Ivaru than GILS! Intro panikko, sama character :D
gils said…
//the mail part s, RAM IS MARRIED 2 UMA!!
and frst part la avan avlo feelings twrds lover, must be priya! :D//

!!!! ada aapecurungala..ipdi kuda yosikalmao...pesama kathaiya nee continue panni mudichidu :)
gils said…
hey. :) thanks for the PR :D

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