Jillunu oru kaathal kathai :) -1
As a kid i had been warned
never to look at lightning directly..
But couldnt help it
when you showed up
Like a multicolored lightning..
burning your picture on my mind..
and blinding me with love.....
And they say
Lightning never strikes twice at the same place
Maybe my heart was an exception to that..
you were my sweetest dream
which stayed on with my eyes
even while open....
Like a mid afternoon breeze
you came into my life..
Life never looked rosier
You had the most talkative eyes..
They more than compensated for
your silence
by making a mess of mine
"Hey purushaa...ithoda continuation engada" endraal Uma.
"Adipaavi..itha engenthu edutha..and by the way... thanks for the mariaathai" endru aval kaiyil iruntha antha papera pidunga muyarchithaan Ram.
"haiii..avlo easya thara maaten...veedu clean panrachay kedaichuthu..unnoda "treasure box" dabbalenthu..aama ithenna...pullayaar suzhilaam potruka..deiveega Kaadhal?"
"cha cha..first first love panromay athaan pullyaar suzhi poatu start panlaamnu.."
"velangidichi...athennada most talkative eyes..kannu pesutha...so corny...if i can flake it..namma veetuku rendu masathuku corn flakeskaagum..hahaha"
"hmm...coming from you thats bigger than pulitzer.."
"vevevee...ipdilaam ice vacha nee ezhuthirukarathu nallarukunu sollvennu expect pannaatha"
"seri..athu kedakatumm..oru cup coffee kedaikumaada...semma tireda iruku"
"naan azhagaaa iruken sollu..coffee kedaikum"
"usuala poi sonna bojanam kedaikaathu solvanga..inga ultava iruku..aaah...killathaa"
"iru iru..coffeela phenol oothi kondu varen"
"oh..appo usuala podra coffe thaana inikum"
"poda..po neeye coffee potuko" endru kovathudan sofavil ukkanthaal Uma.
"achucho..chellam...kochikaathamaa..usuala podra antha brown color thiravam potu kududa...pleeeessee...pleeeeseeee..."
"appo kuda paaru..unaku kozhupu adanguthaanu..iru iru...sakkaraiku badila uppa kotti kondu varen"
"thankuda chellam"
Uma kitchenukul sendra pin..vegu neram varai antha letteraiye verithu paarthavaaru amarthirunthan Ram...antha kadithathin marupaguthiyai ninaithavaray.
"Then came the season of seperation
Now if one think about it..
has no rhyme or reason..
happiness stepped out when
ego stepped in..
neither did i budge
nor did you give in..
Time rolled away..
and we went seperate ways..
travelled too far..
there is no comeback..
still goin on
with the hope that...
our paths may cross oneday..
for
to meet and part is the way of life..
to part and meet is the hope of life"
"Enna dorai..deep thinkingla irukeenga.."
Uma's voice brought him back to present.
"hmm..athuva..nee poda pora coffeeya nenachu konjam bayama irunthichi...medical insurance number enannu yosichitrunthen"
"ithu mokka..nejatha sollu..enna prachana..un moonjiya paakaamalaye un mood ennanu solravaluku ithu kuda teriatha.."
"onumilada" Ram smiled..
"officela prachanaiya...yaarnu sollu potu thaliralam"
"hahaa..apdi evanaachum prachanai panna kandipa unkita solren..okva"
"pinna vera ennathukaga ipdi moojiye thooki vachikitu ukkanthiruntha"
"ada raama...onumilama...inoru vaati ithey kelviya keta..aprum naan coffee poda vendirukum.."
"enna prachanainu ketathuku kolai merattala.."Eeram" padam paathala..athula vara pei mathiri coffeeya vanthu unna pazhi vaanguven"
"aama ipo coffela aavi varuthu..apo aaviye coofeeya varum"
"mokka mokka..." endru thalaiyanaiyaal Uma avanai adikka muyarchikka adi vaanguvathu pol paasaangu seithavaaray avalai katti anaithaan Ram.
(ithu "U" rated blogngarathaala..rendu flower shake aagratha neengalay imagine panikunga)
"If anyone asks you to name few things which, would be/has been, available all throughout this planet...from time immemorial...the first thing to crop in anyone's mind would be... LOVE. The simplest and most commonest of 4 letter words, albeit the most complex one at that. But more often than not, like lightning is to rain, Love is to tears. Whether they are happy tears or sad ones..no bets on that. I personally feel, there must be some vein or something going deep from your tear gland to the heart. And whenever something happens which makes it aflutter or skip a beat..it directly activates the gland and the damn tears dam, "tears" open. Well..unlike most love stories ours started where most stories would end.
Here comes the tortoise coil...weaving through the memories....
(To be contiued)
never to look at lightning directly..
But couldnt help it
when you showed up
Like a multicolored lightning..
burning your picture on my mind..
and blinding me with love.....
And they say
Lightning never strikes twice at the same place
Maybe my heart was an exception to that..
you were my sweetest dream
which stayed on with my eyes
even while open....
Like a mid afternoon breeze
you came into my life..
Life never looked rosier
You had the most talkative eyes..
They more than compensated for
your silence
by making a mess of mine
"Hey purushaa...ithoda continuation engada" endraal Uma.
"Adipaavi..itha engenthu edutha..and by the way... thanks for the mariaathai" endru aval kaiyil iruntha antha papera pidunga muyarchithaan Ram.
"haiii..avlo easya thara maaten...veedu clean panrachay kedaichuthu..unnoda "treasure box" dabbalenthu..aama ithenna...pullayaar suzhilaam potruka..deiveega Kaadhal?"
"cha cha..first first love panromay athaan pullyaar suzhi poatu start panlaamnu.."
"velangidichi...athennada most talkative eyes..kannu pesutha...so corny...if i can flake it..namma veetuku rendu masathuku corn flakeskaagum..hahaha"
"hmm...coming from you thats bigger than pulitzer.."
"vevevee...ipdilaam ice vacha nee ezhuthirukarathu nallarukunu sollvennu expect pannaatha"
"seri..athu kedakatumm..oru cup coffee kedaikumaada...semma tireda iruku"
"naan azhagaaa iruken sollu..coffee kedaikum"
"usuala poi sonna bojanam kedaikaathu solvanga..inga ultava iruku..aaah...killathaa"
"iru iru..coffeela phenol oothi kondu varen"
"oh..appo usuala podra coffe thaana inikum"
"poda..po neeye coffee potuko" endru kovathudan sofavil ukkanthaal Uma.
"achucho..chellam...kochikaathamaa..usuala podra antha brown color thiravam potu kududa...pleeeessee...pleeeeseeee..."
"appo kuda paaru..unaku kozhupu adanguthaanu..iru iru...sakkaraiku badila uppa kotti kondu varen"
"thankuda chellam"
Uma kitchenukul sendra pin..vegu neram varai antha letteraiye verithu paarthavaaru amarthirunthan Ram...antha kadithathin marupaguthiyai ninaithavaray.
"Then came the season of seperation
Now if one think about it..
has no rhyme or reason..
happiness stepped out when
ego stepped in..
neither did i budge
nor did you give in..
Time rolled away..
and we went seperate ways..
travelled too far..
there is no comeback..
still goin on
with the hope that...
our paths may cross oneday..
for
to meet and part is the way of life..
to part and meet is the hope of life"
"Enna dorai..deep thinkingla irukeenga.."
Uma's voice brought him back to present.
"hmm..athuva..nee poda pora coffeeya nenachu konjam bayama irunthichi...medical insurance number enannu yosichitrunthen"
"ithu mokka..nejatha sollu..enna prachana..un moonjiya paakaamalaye un mood ennanu solravaluku ithu kuda teriatha.."
"onumilada" Ram smiled..
"officela prachanaiya...yaarnu sollu potu thaliralam"
"hahaa..apdi evanaachum prachanai panna kandipa unkita solren..okva"
"pinna vera ennathukaga ipdi moojiye thooki vachikitu ukkanthiruntha"
"ada raama...onumilama...inoru vaati ithey kelviya keta..aprum naan coffee poda vendirukum.."
"enna prachanainu ketathuku kolai merattala.."Eeram" padam paathala..athula vara pei mathiri coffeeya vanthu unna pazhi vaanguven"
"aama ipo coffela aavi varuthu..apo aaviye coofeeya varum"
"mokka mokka..." endru thalaiyanaiyaal Uma avanai adikka muyarchikka adi vaanguvathu pol paasaangu seithavaaray avalai katti anaithaan Ram.
(ithu "U" rated blogngarathaala..rendu flower shake aagratha neengalay imagine panikunga)
"If anyone asks you to name few things which, would be/has been, available all throughout this planet...from time immemorial...the first thing to crop in anyone's mind would be... LOVE. The simplest and most commonest of 4 letter words, albeit the most complex one at that. But more often than not, like lightning is to rain, Love is to tears. Whether they are happy tears or sad ones..no bets on that. I personally feel, there must be some vein or something going deep from your tear gland to the heart. And whenever something happens which makes it aflutter or skip a beat..it directly activates the gland and the damn tears dam, "tears" open. Well..unlike most love stories ours started where most stories would end.
Here comes the tortoise coil...weaving through the memories....
(To be contiued)
Comments
Story semaiya irukku.. orre the feelings ... adutha part enga??? sattu buttunu podunga...
aamaam.. athu yen appapo sutha thamil, meethi time ellam casual thamil varuthu???
எஸ்! எஸ்! :((
//g3 kitta kuduthu tamila convert pannunga ;)//
ஜி3 பாஸ் இப்ப பிசி பாஸ் !
[அப்பன்னா நான் எப்ப படிச்சு எப்ப à®®ுடிக்கிறது அவ்வ்வ்வ்வ்வ்வ்]
ஆஹா அதெல்லாà®®் செய்யணுà®®ா? (ப்ச் சொல்லி தர அப்ப யாà®°ுà®®ே இல்லாà®®ா போச்சே!)
:)))))
"naan azhagaaa iruken sollu..coffee kedaikum"
"usuala poi sonna bojanam kedaikaathu solvanga..inga ultava iruku..aaah...killathaa"
"iru iru..coffeela phenol oothi kondu varen"
"oh..appo usuala podra coffe thaana inikum".//
செà®® ஃப்ளோ à®®ீ த தொடர்ந்து சிà®°ிச்சிà®™்க் :))))))
à®’.கே à®’.கே!
பட் டூயட் சாà®™்க் எதாச்சுà®®் இருந்துச்சுன்னா பின்னாடி வெள்ளை டிà®°ெஸ் தேவதைகள் கண்டிப்பா ஓட விடணுà®®் கற்பனையெல்லாà®®் பண்ணமுடியாது! :)))
ennamo poanga ... onnum solrathukilla ... !
aarti sonna maari, appo appo senthamiz appo appo colloquial , adha thavira ellamey super.
Last peragraphla enna polambi erukkey ? hmm mitcha part padikka arvama erukku, seekram ezudhu da
Unna kalaikkanum nu nenachen...but you see, indha kozu va adikanum nu thonala! Pozhachu poikko!!
Waiting for sec part! Hey flowers dashing was cool :P
The simplest and most commonest of 4 letter words, albeit the most complex one at that. - Very very true :)
Dei purushanu irundhirundha innum supera irundhirukumae :P
//"cha cha..first first love panromay athaan pullyaar suzhi poatu start panlaamnu.."//
Ungalukku pullayar fav kadavulnu theriyum.. aana indha alavukkunnu theriyaama pochae :P :P
//"usuala poi sonna bojanam kedaikaathu solvanga..inga ultava iruku..aaah...killathaa"
"iru iru..coffeela phenol oothi kondu varen"
"oh..appo usuala podra coffe thaana inikum"//
ROTFL :))))))))
ROTFL-O-ROTFL :))))))))))))
Sathyama mudila raasa :D
to part and meet is the hope of life"
ROTFL :):)
:)))
//again uma and ram??? nooooooooo//
:))))))))
//romba kashtamaa irukku padikka...g3 kitta kuduthu tamila convert pannunga ;)//
ithu taaaap idea...apdiye panren :D
:) soor soor..seekrama postaren
//Those lil verses sprinkled at the beginning, middle and end-so relevant!!You undoubtedly have that writing nerve,man!!//
nanri hai :)
//
vittu vittu ezhuthina apdithanga varum :d diff flow each time :)
//aamaam, athu enna ellarum 3 comment potirukaanga?? ethavathu new rulea inga?? hehehe..//
LOL :d yeah mooonu kament poata mutta biriyaani paarcel :D
ada summaa baas...seene puttings :)
//ஆஹா அதெல்லாà®®் செய்யணுà®®ா? (ப்ச் சொல்லி தர அப்ப யாà®°ுà®®ே இல்லாà®®ா போச்சே!)
//
hehehehe
thinkinathu tamizhla writinathu english :D
:)))
//பட் டூயட் சாà®™்க் எதாச்சுà®®் இருந்துச்சுன்னா பின்னாடி வெள்ளை டிà®°ெஸ் தேவதைகள் கண்டிப்பா ஓட விடணுà®®் கற்பனையெல்லாà®®்//
sooraahaaa :)
:)))))) enanga onumay ilatneenga :)
//loved it! its so heartfelt..will wait for the next paguthis//
:D :D
:)))) unakagavay fulla tamizhla podren iru :)
//I loved your first "poem" :D//
nanri hai :)
!!!!! ithukum kathaikum wat sambandam?? ram n uma in love ever since i started blogging! :D
//andha first kavidhai enna tamil pattu da ?//
nthg specific..enaku tamizhla thonina song athu..atha apdiye translate paniten..didnt try in tamil :)
heheheee :D
//but you see, indha kozu va adikanum nu thonala! Pozhachu poikko!!
Waiting for sec part! Hey flowers dashing was cool :P//
aathaa..nanri aathaa :)
:D mishun agamplished :D next post fully tamil thaan :D
//Dei purushanu irundhirundha innum supera irundhirukumae :P//
adutha partula podren :D
//
heheheh :D athelam kadnukapdaathu
//ROTFL-O-ROTFL :))))))))))))
Sathyama mudila raasa :D//
:D :D
adapavingala..naanany naanany
nanaay eluthinathu athu!!
wow :) thank u TTT :)
hey carpe :D soor soor :)
kadha nalla serious ah vum comedy yavum nalla pochu :)
/*ithu "U" rated blogngarathaala..rendu flower shake aagratha neengalay imagine panikunga*/
ha ha ha ... superb...
apram.. indha kadhaya.. kadhaya marakarathukulla mudichiduveengalla?? ;)
English la ezhudhinathukku romba thanks!! I wouldnt have had much patience to read if it were in Tamil! :)
i the tryings :D
//Nice one. waiting to read more//
hey deekshanya :) welgum back :) danx for the feedback
epovumay apdithaanga :D
:) read the third comment i got...ipo naan yaarukunu yezhuthrathu :D :D
Konjam dharma sankatam daan :P Seri naanga adjust pannikarom :)
LOL oru sankatamum ila :D naalu varushama itha thaan solitrukaanga..write in tamilnu...i do occassionally ana its very tedious and lotts spelling mistakes creep in..so tanglishkay en vote :)