Maatrangal Nirantharamanavai

"Hello..naan Madurailenthu Chitra pesaren...Lakshmi maami irukaangala"
"Naan thaan pesaren....sollungo.."
"Neenga anupina jaadagam paathoam...enga paiyanodathum unga ponnodathum nalla porunthuthu...fotovum paathoam...engaluku ponnu pudichiruku...nerla paiyanoda paaka varoam...intha sunday varalaamnu irukoam...neenga enna solrel"
Guppendru verthathu Lakshmi maamiku...nalla naaluleye tension party...ipo kekanuma...
"Seetha...adiye seeeeethaaa...engadi poi tholanja....koopta kuraluku yaarachum en kekarangala paar.."
"adhaan varen varennu solitrukenla...en indha kathu kathara...enna problem unaku"
"problema...asaday...vaaila nalla vaartha varuthaa paaru..pora edathula mothu vaanga pora..appava koopdu"
"enna en mandai uruluthu..TP mami enna solra.." came appa winking at seetha...
"Enna TP maami...apdina? pakathaathu kutti kooda ena paathu TP maaminu solitu...kekkka bekkaynu sirikuthu...enna karumamo....solla vanthatha maranthiten...ipo thaan madurailenthu fone panna...avaaluku namma seethava romba pudichi poacham..sunday ponnu paaka varataanu kekara..."
"Ipo ennama en kalyanathuku avasaram..sriramuku paaru modhhala...inum konja naal poatum"
"evlo naal...naan pora varaikuma....en kanna moodrathukulla...unaku oru kalyanam panni vachiralaamnu iruken..unakepdi vasathi"..
appa BP slighta eruvathai unarthu seetha silentaga aval roomuku pogiraal...
"yen na kovapdarel....ava kidaka china kozhandai...sunday vara solita..."
"en innum josiyam paakanuma...ithana neram sollama enna panna....asamanjam"
"ungalaanda oru vaartha ketundu...." maami mudipatharkul...
"aama...apdiye ellam enna ketu thaan nadakuthu intha veetla...paaru...Hindu paper vaangindu vaadanu anupi oru mani neram aaguthu..enga oodhikitu nikaraanu therila...ivana nambi oru thanga irukanu konjamachum porupu iruka paar.."
"...archanai aarambichacha.."...sriram entry...
"..appa...unakko Hindu paper padikalina coffee erangaathu..un avasarathuku potti kadaila vela paapana..oor kodila cheapa irukunu veeta katitu...oru paper vaanga kooda one hour travel panna vendi iruku...ithuku thaan cityku poidlaamnu solren..ketaathana..."
"seri seri..kaalangaathala dhargam pannatha..seethava ponnu paaka sunday varenu soliruka..nee paatuka kilambi oor sutha poidaatha...annava latchanama veetla iru..."
"poamma...sunday oru naal thaan leave..nimadiya tv paaklamana emma gumbal sekkara..vera naalay kidakaliya..."
"Konjamachum porupoda pesarana paar..rascal..vara kovathuku..."
"neenga summa irungonna...endhaan ipdi porupillama irukiyo...ivala mudalla kara sethutu unaku oru vazhi pananum"
vandha velai vetrigarama mudinja sandoshathil ram escapes to his room...
"naan onnu soluven...kovichuka koodathu"
"enna...unga veetu gumbaluku dammaraam adikanum athaana"
"yen na ipdi dvesham paaratrel..ava enna panita ungala..."
"seri...en ipo kanna kasakkara..indha dramlaan thaan 30 varushama pathachey..inum enna...kooptu thola"

Anru naal muzhuvadhum seetha matum allathu avanga veetu foneum engageda irunthathu...

"trrrrrringg..trrrrrrringggg"
"enda sriram..andha fonea sitha edukka koodatha..ellathukum naan thaan varanuma....naan kanna mooditena theriyum...Halo..yaaru pesarathu...aama...lakshmi thaan pesaren....ennathu...AIAYAO..enna solrel...ipo epdi iruka...ada rama..sunday vera ivla ponnu paka varalay..naanga epdi varathu...thalli podaratha...epdi naan solrathu...thappa ninachutaangana...nalla idam....."
Fonai kizha vaithuvitu arai uyirai sarinthaal lakshmi maami...
"ammmmmaa.....ammma...ennama...enna aachu..yar fonela...seetha...seekram poi thanni konda....naan appauku fone podren....retirement vaangitu veetla ammaku thunaiya irungona ivar ketathana...veembu pudivaatham..."
mayakkam thelinthu maami kan vizhithu paarkiraal...
"amma ipo matum nee..cinemala vara mathiri....Naan enga irukannu ketannau vachuko....comedya irukummm"
"che vaaya mudri...konjama machum porupu iruka par...ennadi achu...yaar fonela..."
"yen na namala matum ipdi kashtagalam pudcihi aatarthu..."
"enna keta..30 varushama ithuku badil theriyama than muzhichitu iruken..."
"vilaadra nerama ithu...nethu vandila porachey unga anna kizha vizhunthutalam...thalila adiyaam...pozhaikarthey kashtam...vandhu paathutu pongonu solra...nalaiku ponu pakka varaanu kooda soliten...irunthalum manasu kekala...nallathu nadakara samyathula..ethachum onnu kidaka onuu aaidchuna...abasagunama poidumey...ipo enna panrathu...ipo poi aavala vara vendaamnum solla mudiyathu...ithan neram kilambi irupa....enaku onnum purila.."
Appa sofavil mounamaga amargiraar....
"peasama avnaga kita onum sola venam ipo...ellam nallapadiya agatum apruma solikalaam"
"poda mandu...uravungarathu...nambikala uruvagatathu..arambamay poiya.."
"apdilam patha velaikaagathu..."
sriram kovamaga selgiraan
"yen na ipo enna panrathu"
"onnum purila...yosikalam"

kalakala ena iruntha veedu galgalathu ponathu...mudivil sriram sonathu pol unmaiyai maraikka mudivu seya pattathu...

sunday..

"Sunnyday today...ila"
"sunnydayva...saniyanay...paatu kekutha unaku...poi readyaagudi...konjamaachum bayam iruka parungalen.."
"un ponu thana una mathiri than irukum"
"enna kutham solalina ungaluku porukatha"
"seri seri..neenga rendu perum adichukatheenga...naan readyagaren..vanthu bajji sojji thingaravangaluku kudukara mariyadaiya engalukum konjam kudunga..."
"adi seruppala..." endru appa chellamga thuratha.."eeeeeee" nru kathiya padi seetha odugiraal...
"raama...appavay ipdi kuzhandha madhiri odina..hmmmmmmmmmm...idungala kara sekarthukula en praanam pari poidum pola irukay...eesavara..."
"yen nna...inum ava varaliye...oru vela iniki vara mudilaiyo?..traffic jama irukumo?...neriya vera sweet kaaramlam senju vachiten..ipo ennana panrathu?"
"ummm..un pullayandanta kudu...avanay gaali paniduvan"
"en avan mela ipdi erinju vizharel...kolli kannu...patu tholaika porathu.."
Kaiyil cellum..vayil vadaiyumai sriram vara...nakkalana paarvaiyudan appa vaasaluku selgirar...

"en na...unmaiya marachathu thappo..athan late agutha..."
"che podi...ulla ethachum vela iruntha paaru po"
Thideerena...

Second floorilirunthu kookural....
"AIYOOOOOOO...IPDI ANIYAYAMA...ENGALA EMAATHITU poiteengalay..."

"Ithanai naala izhuthundu kidantha kaamu paati mandaiya poatuta maama..." endru mel veetu sethuraaman kadhariyabadi kizhay vara...dhoorathil oru maaruthi vandi vanthu kondirunthathi verithapadi paarthu kondu irunthanar lakshmi maamiyum mamavum..

Comments

G3 said…
Haiya.. Naan dhaan 1st comment.. 1 plate chicken 65 plz... (correcta 65 pieces irukkanum.. sollitten)

Aanalum neenga kanya range story idhunnu solli avangala insult panni irukka vendaam.. :p

Adhu enna kadaisila naangalae fill up pannikkanuma enna aachunnu? andha alavukku moola irundha naangalae posta poda maatom? climaxum sethu kadhaya ezhudhungappa.. :)
gils said…
nalla vela mysore bonda parcelnu solitu..myora kondaabenga pola...climaxa...halo...storyoda plotay endingala thaan...
Anonymous said…
Gillu maama,
Seriyaana Mylapore maama nu un style ley kaatti kodukkuthu ..Aaana un climax superb ..it balances the length of the story ..Felt like watching a crazy mohan drama ..a serious story, with layers of comedy ..oru tip ennanaa ..konjam ennum short and sweetaa yezhutha try pannu ..

Ravusupaarty Ramanathan
prithz said…
Ahaaaaaaaa.. romba naal aardhu iyer aathu baashai kaetu.. inga yellarum local s'porean tamil ah pesaraa..illa namba ooru pasanga.. madras tamil la peter udraanga.. iyer baashai la paesina..kindal pandraanga... :(

seri ..kadaiku varumvom..scene story gils... yeanga aathula, yeannoda cuzn kalayanam moodhu mood lam ipdi dhan irundhudhu..ore comedy..naanga cuzns ellarum saenthu, avana ootindhom.. naanga ellarum, ooru suthidhom... peryava ellarum, ore tension ... chinna pasanaga elarkum dose, ipdi maplai ya kootindu ooru sutharoma nu... LOL!!!
golmaalgopal said…
soober story gils....romba nanna irundhudhu....i esp liked that maami fainting scene and d girl tellin "ippo mattum nee naan yenga irukka nu keta comedya irukkum" chancea illa...good timing

besh besh.... :-)
anand said…
hey raam :) epoda vantha hey raam :) enakku sandosham sandoshama varuthu :D velgum n danx 4 d comments :) point taken..next time rathina surukama try panren...

@prithz:
:) evlo peruku puriyumonu yosichundey writenathu ithu...neenga ambi postlaam padikarathilaya...he has superb language...unga veetlaiyum ipdi thaana...enga makkalum ipdi thaan...veetla kalyanamna ponu paiyan gaali...

@golmaal:
hehe..idey dialogue enga veetla naan ketu nalla vaangi katinduiruken...they dont understand its to break the mood n get serious enna panrathu:D
KK said…
Nalla kithuba...anasima oru ponnoda vazhka ipdi antharathla thonga vitutiye??? nalla kitha ithu?? :)
G3, First comment pota saapadu tharanganu yellar blog'layum first comment poda arambichuteenga... :)
gils said…
annatha....ennatha solrathu..ellar lifum apdithenla keethu....sokka soneenga ponga...g3 usshar..puli soru kettu pulichi poi..ipo chickn muttonu vantaanga :D
indianangel said…
நல்லா இருக்கு பதிவு! aana english'la padikkardhukkulla enakku vayasayudum bola irukku! thamizhla ezhudalaame neenga! :)

enakkum indha baashaiya kettu romba naal aachu, naangellam cinema'la vara maadhiri aathulannulam pesaradhu kedayadhu! sila neram nammala konjam overa ootum bodhudhaan kaduppa irukkum! ennamo ivanga thirukurala mozhi peyarthu thooya mozhila pesarangannu nenaippu!
G3 said…
KK & Gils : Ennamo kettadhum kuduthutta maadiri illa dialogue vidareenga... Naanum oru 10 vaati ketta 1 vaatiyaavadhu unmaiya kudukka maateengalannu oru nappaasaila dhaan kekkaren.. mmhmm.. no effects.. :P Aana idhukkellaam naanga pin vaanga maatom.. Thodarndhu 1st comment pottundu dhaan iruppomaakkum.. :)
KK said…
//Ennamo kettadhum kuduthutta maadiri illa dialogue vidareenga//
Ketathum kodupatharku naanga yenga peru onnum Krishnar illaiye :)
Comment'la yavathu first varalamnu paarkureenga...atha yen kedukanum :) potutu ponga ;)
G3 said…
//Comment'la yavathu first varalamnu paarkureenga...atha yen kedukanum :) //

Unga dhaaraala manasukku rommmmmmmmmmmmba nandri... :)
gils said…
indian angel:
same blud here...jus wanted to give it a try on tht language...tamizhla IE setup mathi adika somberithanama iruku...will surely give it a try.
gils said…
kk....g3ketengalaynu try panen...avlo chicken kidakla..konjam kuraiyuthu...
KK said…
Gils, Chicken koranja konjam kakava serthudunga :)
gils said…
:) kalkiteenga..super option....avanga ketathula oru 65 kuraiyuthu :D
Syam said…
soober kathai gils... enna solrathu romba nalla irundhathu... :-)


//vanga ketathula oru 65 kuraiyuthu//

avanga 65 pieces thaan irukanumnu sonnanga...kaakaava chicken ah nu sollala so kaaka sud be ok :-)
gils said…
intha vishayam kelvi patu ellam crowskum...kaakka guniya vanthiruchaam :D irunthalum paravala G3 ketrukanga..so order panida vendi than :D namma katchiyun saarba avangaluku oru parcellllll
kanya said…
@Gils....

Nalla kathai Gils... unga flow romba azhaga irukku... dialogue is also sequential... parattukal

ponnu paakura vishayathai ivlo sound'a aaki irukeenga... aana ippo ellam simple'a pizza hut illa barista'la mudiyuthu.. :P

Here is wat i think abt the story..

one sided dialogues (phone'la pesurathu...) ithu screen'la paaka nalla irukkum... ezhuthula oru completion irukkanum... ellathaiyum sollanum'nu illa... character'sa strong'a build pannum poothu padikiravangalukke intha character aduthu enna solla pooguthunnu theriyunam...

unga kathai'la ore maathiriyaana sequence irukku... i mean comedy romba monotonous'a irukku... it is alwayz abt father and son.. again.. periya navale ellam patheenganna sufficient gap koduthu next mono-style comedy konduvaruvaanga... aana chinna stories'ku repeat irukka vendiya avasiyam illa..

last but not the least...thamizh kathaiya thamizh'la ezhutha try pannunga gils..
confused said…
yeeyappa.. kanya ella nirai-kuraigalayum sollittanga poliruku.. :)

nalla irundudu gils kadhai, ana padika konjam kashtama irundhudhu, like yar enda dialogue pesaranu..
enna idu unga blog en pera ellam mathi kamikudu :(( mundhina comment naa than kodi.
gils said…
@kanya:
!!!en kathaiya vida perusa comment poatathuku first oru danx.. :D pichu vaangiteenga..super observation...all points akcepted :D tamizhla try panrenu ithoda neriya thadava vaakurtuhi kuduthiten...next time aachum try panren :)antha monotony part purila

@confused :
en kadhaiya pathu bayantheengala..ila kanya comment paatha :D danx for ur comments..point taken
gils said…
hahaha...porkodi confuseda aaidhca.. :D apdithaanga..samyathila en peray maari varuthu :( paarunga..anandnu vara comment nan poatathu thaan....gilsnu evlo azhaga (ahem) per vachruken..engenthu thideernu anandnu marichunu therila...kanyavoda postla sherloknu varuthu... :D blogspotuku ESP undo?
Priya said…
nice story..iyer bashai typical..
ana, ponnu pakka varathukellam ippa yaarum ippadi tension agaradhilla.
Syam said…
//en kathaiya vida perusa comment poatathuku first oru danx//

gils, kanya perisa comment podalanaa thaan etho problem nu ninaikanum :-)
gils said…
@priya:
:) u never know...except for the climax..rest of the scenes i've been eye witness to on many accounts....pen paarkum padalam is still a major thing in mid. class
@syam:
soopera sonennga :D
gils said…
priya..btw...tt china kutti paapa..semma cute..ws tis suttufied frm the twins forward?
stavirs said…
typical iyer mama..over typical maami.typical ponnu payyan..nalla erukku.. ana enakku edho romba nalla kadhaya theriyalai - nalla ezhapatrikku ana nalla kadhai ellai. endingla oru twist erukkanum adhu correct thaan.. anaa romba sogama seetha ponnu parka vara function stop aara madhiri ezhudhinathu enakku pudikkalai. Maami maama romba overa vey sandai podralonnu thonudhu. for example in the place where the mama tells that sriram will finish all bajji - no maami will scold like that to her husband.

+ nalla story writing skill unakku erukku

+ nalla iyyer adhuthu bashai

+ angey angey family jokes

+ unexpected ending

- tamil writtern in english - it stops the flow of the story as we cant read it fast and sometimes tamil words kolambudhu - setha phone edungo - seetha. and sometimes u use shorter spelling which makes it even difficult to understand the word

- kind of negative ending

- over scene maami - sorry i dont think maamis are like this now a days. In fact they are very matured

but onnu mattum nichayam,

Gilma oru writer ayittan!
Has to be me said…
Naan idha, idha than yadhirpathen!!
Besh besh romba nanna irukku!
Gils oru sooper story writer! :)
gils said…
mr.vats:
ending nee eduthukaratha poruthu iruku..who knows...the grooms people may not take this things into consideration at all...and as for maami...dude...i've seen more maamis like this in my area..n i've given jus a few shades of their character...idukey unaku pudikalainta...and for the scene ver maami scolds mama over sriram...tts normalda...seriousa thitala...jus chellama....hen midichi chicken saagava porathu...(ahaa..g3 idha padichangana enna solaporangalo :D )

@HTBM:
vanga vaanga..enna romba nala aalay kanum
Priya said…
//pen paarkum padalam is still a major thing in mid. class//
ENga cousin a ponnu pakka vandhappa it was very casual..But naan niraya pathathu illa. so, u may be rite.

//...tt china kutti paapa..semma cute..ws tis suttufied frm the twins forward?//
I think so. Don't remember exactly which forward.
KK said…
//ahaa..g3 idha padichangana enna solaporangalo//
Avangala padikatiyum neengale usupi viduveenga pola irukku... :)
G3 ithuvaraikku paakama iruntha kooda, ippo intha comment avangala usupi vidum :)

narayana narayana... :D
gils said…
@priya:
it depends..ipolam gals n guys a remostly working out of places away frm their families..enaku therinja rendu per, were in germany when their allianaces matched...they met in germany and confirmed the engagement...intha kathaila vara characters are staying with their parents..n lets say paiyan is frm a diff city...so casual situtations scope kammi...n moreover ithu oru early 80' sorta storynu vachukongalen...infact language kooda adhaan ipdi potruken :)
gils said…
@kk:
patha vachitiye paratta :d
Has to be me said…
Didnt u check my blog...I said I was away for a few days. Thats y u didnt c me around. Im back now but likely to be away again fr a few days.
gils said…
htbm:
oh is it...thirumbavum Africa toura : eagerly waiting for snaps :)
Usha said…
hello, nalla story, aana enna ending? mel veetu paati pona ivangaluku enna problem?? Pls clarify
Known Stranger said…
i felt I am reading RK narayan stories. very simple giving the insight of a family, their routine way of talks and the ending. Just reminds me the stories of Rk naryanan.
gils said…
@usha:
full story padikaliya? they hide one unfortunate incident in their family for fear of spoiling the function...but same thing happens in a different family at the same venue (their house)..athaan twist

@KS:

hehehe...nalla vela ithe kekka rk narayan ila...still thanks for the compliment

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