Bandham

"Enna maama epdirukel...aathula ellam sowkiyama"

"Raama...adaadaee...vaapa..vaa..evlo naal aachu paathu..guruvaayoorapan krubaila ellarum parama sowkiyam..chappala ullaye vitru..velila vitta pora varavaaluku edanjalaa irukum"

"maami enga..avanga keta book eduthundu vanthiruken.."

"oh...iniki appo enaku saapadu kedaiyaathu..booka vachitu ukkanthirapora naal poora..."

"enna..en thala urulrathu vaada Raama..enna intha pakkam aalay kaanum..aavani avitathuku paathathu..ipovaachum vazhi nyabgathuku vanthuchay"

"Maami..neenga keta book vaangitu vanthiruken..inthaango"

"lanjama...pozhachipo..ada..pudu booka irukay"

"libraryla thedi paathen..kedaikala..athaan vaangiten.."

"enda kaasa waste panra..Libraryla ilaina vitra vendi thaana..ithukaga.." she checks the prize.."adapaavi..300 roobava..unga ammakku terinja enakku thaan mothu vizhum..endi en pulla kaasa ipdi kari aakaranu"

"cha cha..amma onum solamata..nan pathukaren"

"endaapa..unaku penn paarkum padalam epdi poitruku..ethachum amainjutha"

"therila maama..amma aana seriousa theditruka..en horoscope horroscopea irukum pola..athan naan escape aaindruken..enniki maata poren therila "

"ipdiye thallindu pona epdi..kaalakalathula engaluku kalyanaa saapaadu poduvanu patha.."

"en..ivlo vakkanaia pesarale..nenga thaan oru ponna pakrathu..naal poora lions club..antha clubnu suthikitay irukolono"

"nan ennadi paakamala iruken..nethu kooda Anatharaman maama kita Ramoda vishayama thaan pesitrunthen"

"yaar..Anatharaman maamava..velanginapola than..Ram...ivara nambina unaku nera aruvathaam kalyaanam thaan"

"aiooooo..topic change..itha ketu ketu pulichi poachu..enna vara sonna mattera pathi solungo. etho peria list vachiruken enakunu sonnele..enna vishayam"

"cheechu mail anupirukaanda..."

"ohh..sooper..cheechu epdirukan..pesi romba naalaaguthu"

"nallarukaan...avan ponnuku school leave vitaacham..oru 6 maasam anga NewJersey vanthu thanga solraan..athaan maamia kootindu america polaamnu iruken..ticketlaam avanay anupitaan..vara sunday night 12.45ku AirIndia flight.."

"aama anga ipo winter start aaga porathay...ungaluku maargazhi maasa kuliray aagathay..anga epdi manage pannaporel"

"hmm..kashtam thaan..pazhagidum..moonavathu thadavaiya poromlaya..pona thadava ponapovo..avlo kuliru therila..modho konja naaliku veda vedanu irukum..aprum pazhagidum..paavam..un maami thaan..Arasi kolangal paakama epdi iruka poranu therila..hahahaa"

"hahahaa"

"aama..sirikarathuku onum kuraichal ila..oru naaliku current poiduthuna porum..thaam thoomnu kuthika vendiathu..enna sollitu kadisila vidama follow panrathenamo ivar than..anga clubla poitu ennatha discuss panraannu nenaikra..devayani senjathu righta thappanu oru pattimandramay nadakum..unga maama thaan visu "

"hahahaa"

"hmm..unaku nalla kaamedia iruka..kalyanam panniko..theriyum"

"aaama avanay mazhupal case..neenga vera ipdi bayamuruthi vidatheengo..vantha kaariatha vitutu vala valanu pesarathay vazhakama poachu...Ram..oru rendu naaliku konjam ingaye thangidria.. kooda maada othaasayaa irukum..paalcardlenthu phone bill varaikum..ellathaiyum naanay paathuka vendiruku..saturday sunday unaku leave thaana..friday office mudichitu nera inga vanthiraya"

"ohh..kandipa..ithula enna iruku..naan oru list poturen..ennalam eduthu vachukanaum..enalam inga mudikka vendia velaigalnu...so that ..chatuputun aachunu kariatha mudichiralam"

"seri..enaku adupangaraila egapatta velai iruku..velakaari varathukulla paathramellam ozhichi podanum..naan poren..nee irunthu saaptutu po..kaalla veneer kotina mathiri odidatha..yenna..payala pudichi vachikongo.."

"nan pathukaren..neenga unga velaya parunga madam"

"ukkum" endru mugatha tholil idithu kaatiyavaray maami samayalaraikul sendraal.

"en maama..cheechu..india epo varaan"

"therila..avan enga ipo varaporaan..oru vela enga yarukaachum udambu sarilana varuvaana irukum..athuvum varano ilayo" endraar virakthiaayaga sirithavaray.

"en maama apdi solrel..ungalukonum udambukelam vara venaam..and cheechuvum apdi pattavan ilaa"

"naan thappa onum solalapa..en pullyaandaana pathi enaku teriaatha..intha kaalathula..petha pasangalta oru distance maintain panikarathu thaan elarukum nallathu..ipo engaathaye eduthukoyen..ennoda first priority ipo un maami thaan..avala nalla vachundoma..raamaa krishnaanu kaalatha thallinomaanu irukarathu thaan enaku nallathu..en pasangallam enaku second priority thaan..franka solrene.. kalyaanam aagara varaikum thaan avangalaam ennoda controlla iruntha. After marriage..naan paathen..ava avaakunu family set aagiduthu.. apo poi naama namma controlla elaarum iruaknumnu paatha seripatu varathu. Athaan freeya vituten. Freeya vitutengaratha vida..enaku freedom kedaicha mathiri iruku..hahaha.."

"hmmm"

"Onnu purinjuko Raama..ipovay solrene nenachukaatha..unakum intha situation oru kaalathula varum..apo maam sonnatha nyabgam vachuko..ipovay cheechuvay eduthuko..USla greencard vaangitaan.avan wife anga vela pakara..kozhandhailaam angeye padikarathu..friends circlenu ellamay avanuku anganu aaidithu. Apdi irukarachay..engala paathukarathukaaga..avanga ellariyum inga kootindu vara sonnenu vai..cheechu seivaan..seiya maatan solala..aana athu en perla peria selfisha irukum. Avangalam velinaatula irukara facilitiesku pazhagitaa..anga irukara salary..comfort..athelaam inga enga kedaika poguthu..apdieye irunthalum..antha kozhandhainga paadu inum paavam..athungalaam angeye poranthathulenthu irukungala..igna vantha adjust aga kashtapadum.."

"hmm"

"ithu matumilla..thoorathu pachai thaan kannuku kulumaingarathu uravugala porutha varai romba unmai...en peythi irukalay..ipovay count panitrukaalam..inum thaatha anga vara ethana mani neram irukunu...peran enaku itha vaanginduva atha vanginduvaanu oru listay anupirukaan..ipovay kelambi vaa nu fonela adampudikaran azharan. Kekavay evlo santhoshama iruku..koodavay iruntha oru vela..bore adichirulam..ennada intha thaatha thona thona nu ethaachum solitay irukaalaynu..en maatuponn avlo paasama iruka..pona thadava ponapo avlo nalla paathukita..kuraiaye solla mudiathu..en ponnu kuda avlo nalla care eduthupaalana doubt thaan.aana again..ethana naaliku...intha mariaayathai paasamlam ithelaam thakka vachukanumna thalli iruakrathu thaan nallathunu enaku thonuthu..ithu thaan sarinu naan solala..but en situationuku ithu nalla amainjiruku..enna keta en paiyan americalenthu inga madrasku velai vangitu vanthalum..thaniya thaan veedu paathu vepen...athan sari pattu varum"

Ram was silent..

"itha paaru Rama..ithula thappu onumila..kaalathuketha pola naama thaan nammala mathikanum..unakum onsite opportunity vanthiruku..aana amma vitu po koodathu solitu nee thatti kazhichitrukannu unga amma thaan enkita sonna..infact she wants you to take this chance and grow in your career...naangalam irukom..ungammava pathukarom...otu stageku mela namakkaga vazha kathukanum kanna..athula thappay ila.."

"Rama..nee inga vaa..ivara vitta ipdi thaan pesiye konuduvar..konjam intha cable tv office varaikum poituvaria.."

"seri maami" kuzhappathudan veliaye sendraan Ram.

Vibrator modela cellfone kurukuruthathu.

"solluma..maami aathula than iruken.."

"kanna..romba vela vaanga pora..ellathayum un thalaila izhuthu potukaatha..nerathuku thungidu...saaptiaapaa"

"cha cha..athelaam ilama..naan pathukaren....seri ma..konja neram kazhichi nan thirumba fone panren"

"seri raja..udamba paathuko..vachidren.."

Call mudintha piragum vegu neram fonai utru paathu kondirunthaan raam.

Satendru thoora thodangiathu..lesaaga thooria mazhaiyin man vaasanai avan manathinai niraithathu.

Comments

ada aniyaya apprenticugala..! enna thaan solla varringa kadasila? vazhakam pola ennoda pinju moolaiku remba conpeesana keedhu! :(

neenga (adhan, neenga thane kadhai zero chi sorry, hero?) homelandla + bachelora irurkadhala inum amma kitta irundhu pasathai kaatta mudidhu nu solringla?
gils said…
dababvoda vadaiyu ungalukay :D
btw, kadhaikku edhuku brahmin accent kuduthurkinga.. :-/ niraya idathula ungluku correctana accent therila :D haiyo haiyo..!

moral of the sory inum clear agalanalum, vadai dabba is with me. 23-C, indhanga unglukaga ore oru vadai. :)
gils said…
//enna thaan solla varringa kadasila? vazhakam pola ennoda pinju moolaiku remba conpeesana keedhu! :(//

endings depends on the readers perspective :) ungaluku ipdi thoniruku..mocha peru ena solranga papom
gils said…
//adhaikku edhuku brahmin accent kuduthurkinga..//

chumma try panlaamnu thaan..romba naal achu intha mathri posti :D


// :-/ niraya idathula ungluku correctana accent therila :D haiyo haiyo..!//

ijit.?? unconsciously wud've missed it :(
Priya said…
Gils, enakku onum puriyala. Tamila ezudhinaley late agum puriya. Ippo vera bashai na tube dhan.

Good one.
Unknown said…
Nice Write up ....:)
mgnithi said…
Gils annathe.. I did a CTRL+R and changed Ram to Gils, when i read the story..

//ivara nambina unaku nera aruvathaam kalyaanam thaan"
//

//endaapa..unaku penn paarkum padalam epdi poitruku..ethachum amainjutha"//

//"hmm..unaku nalla kaamedia iruka..kalyanam panniko..theriyum"//

Ithellam neenga recenta ketakre dialogue thaane :-)
mgnithi said…
I liked the story... Still the ending lines could have been better..

Bashai matter is a good attempt, but still Gilsananda regulara use panra language is seen in some places which does not sync..
Divyapriya said…
enna solla vareenganne puriyale :( que 1: kadasila ram enna pannaan?

que 2: adhenna ellaa kadhailaiyum ram nu per vaikkareenga?

que 3: idhu en oru iyer veettu kadhaiyaa solli irukeenga? wats the significance behind that?

que 4: romba naalaa kalyanathukku paathuttu irukkaanga related dialogue ellaam sondha vaazhkaila nadandhadhaa? :P
sri said…
Answer 1 :

Adhu gils enna pannannu kekkanum, didnot take the abroad chance

Answer 2 :
Ram dhaan Gils gils dhaan Ram

Answer 3 :
Coz gils is iyer :P

Answer 4 :

Neengaley solliteengaley adhaan unmai
Ratzzz said…
NICEEEEEE!!!!!!!


:-) different point of view regd career opportunities...

ungala epdi koopida?? gils na??

anyways "ratty tales" lolzz... :-) Thanks
gils said…
//Gils, enakku onum puriyala. Tamila ezudhinaley late agum puriya. Ippo vera bashai na tube dhan//

:))) give it a try..

@nanthanga:

hey...velgum :)danx for d comment
gils said…
//Ithellam neenga recenta ketakre dialogue thaane :-)/

:)) athu ellaedathulayum kekarathu thaana..

//Bashai matter is a good attempt, but still Gilsananda regulara use panra language is seen in some places which does not sync../

yeah :( first romba consciousa try pannitrunthen..nadula concentration lapse :)
gils said…
//enna solla vareenganne puriyale :( que 1: kadasila ram enna pannaan?

its anybody's guess..nan meant panathu he is plannign to stay

que 2: adhenna ellaa kadhailaiyum ram nu per vaikkareenga?

type adika easya irukunga :D athaan

que 3: idhu en oru iyer veettu kadhaiyaa solli irukeenga? wats the significance behind that?

summa thaan..its a conversation i had with an uncle yesterday morning..athey kathaya solla try panen..avar pesina mathriye kathaiya kondu poga edutha muyarchi thaan iyer tongue :))


que 4: romba naalaa kalyanathukku paathuttu irukkaanga related dialogue ellaam sondha vaazhkaila nadandhadhaa?

ada ithelam aall bachelors kekara kostins thaana
gils said…
//Answer 1 :

Adhu gils enna pannannu kekkanum, didnot take the abroad chance

hahaha...partly true

Answer 2 :
Ram dhaan Gils gils dhaan Ram

:))

Answer 3 :
Coz gils is iyer :P

naat the reason...read previous kament

Answer 4 :

Neengaley solliteengaley adhaan unmai

:))
gils said…
//:-) different point of view regd career opportunities...//

dankies:)

ungala epdi koopida?? gils na??

:)) apdiyum koopdlaam

anyways "ratty tales" lolzz... :-) Thank

:))
Anonymous said…
//Answer 1 :

Adhu gils enna pannannu kekkanum, didnot take the abroad chance

hahaha...partly true//

:) :).

That was a right/great decision,Gils!

//"seri raja..udamba paathuko..vachidren.."//

10min munnadi kooda paarthirundhaaalum,.....

senti post,Gils!
gils said…
//Adhu gils enna pannannu kekkanum, didnot take the abroad chance

hahaha...partly true//

:) :).

That was a right/great decision,Gils! //

:)) greata therila..but it suits my situation..so maybe a correct decision
gils said…
did anyone notice..the character sketch? ellarumay oru vithathula hypocrites..no one is true to themselves..ellamay soozhnilai kaithis..itha thaan titlea vaikalamnu irunthen..but thot the present one wud be apt:)
G3 said…
attendance :)
G3 said…
//did anyone notice..the character sketch? ellarumay oru vithathula hypocrites..no one is true to themselves..ellamay soozhnilai kaithis..itha thaan titlea vaikalamnu irunthen..but thot the present one wud be apt:)//

Ulagathula ellarumae appadi thanae.. illaya ;)
G3 said…
BTW, Raam eppadiyum onsite poga maatarnu enakku theriyumae ;))) Mumbai poradhukkae feel pannavaraachae avaru :P
G3 said…
me the 25 :D
Anonymous said…
//ellarumay oru vithathula hypocrites..no one is true to themselves//
I cannot read this from the post,Gils....But,agree that //ellamay soozhnilai kaithis//! As G3 says, everybody is,aren't they? Everybody acts according to the situation we are put in,don't we??
gils said…
//Ulagathula ellarumae appadi thanae.. illaya ;)//
ileenga..intha kathaila unmaia irukara oray character pathi mention thaan varuthu..antha foriegn paiayan..cheechu..he lives his dreams..without fear of conscience..mathabadi..elarum..fakingout..ulla onnu vachu velila onu solitrukanga
gils said…
//BTW, Raam eppadiyum onsite poga maatarnu enakku theriyumae ;))) Mumbai poradhukkae feel pannavaraachae avaru :P//

ram enga mumbai porathu feel panan?? kathiala ilatha thelam solrenga :D :D
sri said…
//ram enga mumbai porathu feel panan?? kathiala ilatha thelam solrenga :D :D
//

Ram peeti eduthurupaanga :P
sri said…
Ellai Ram oda friendo ennavo yaar kanda :)
gils said…
//Ram peeti eduthurupaanga :P//

???apdina
Annam said…
போட்டேளா போஸ்ட்டு:))))))
Annam said…
போஸ்ட்டு à®°ொà®®்ப பெà®°ுசா இருக்கே....போன வாà®°à®®் போடாததால சேà®°்த்து போட்டேளா:)
Annam said…
over sentiyaa irukkey y la veeta thedutho
gils said…
//போஸ்ட்டு à®°ொà®®்ப பெà®°ுசா இருக்கே....போன வாà®°à®®் போடாததால சேà®°்த்து போட்டேளா://

hey pikaali..enga poitel..aalaye kaanum :) yeah yeah..ungalta sonenla..one week posta matennu..athaan sethu vachu postiachu
gils said…
//over sentiyaa irukkey y la veeta thedutho//

ethu thedutho??
R-ambam said…
lovely write up ! romba nannaarukku baesh baesh!

readers perspective...onsite vaendangraar .... to me :)
R-ambam said…
aana kalyanam vaendaam nu sollalai gils..er... ram, hee he!
gils said…
hey...rambam madam...vanga vanga..enga aalaye kaanum...

//aana kalyanam vaendaam nu sollalai gils..er... ram, hee he!//

:D :D

Popular posts from this blog

Rudhra Veenai

Dasavatharam

Pirivom Santhippom