Manram vantha thendral - 1

Echuseme makkas n makkis...Vikatanla chiku bukku thodarnu onu recenta poada arambichirukan..nice read..antha inspirationla kirukinathu thaan intha story..mudicha aprum paatha thaan theriyuthu..as usual..it stretched 1 BPL(beyond one post limit) :D so first installment idho...seekrama padichita second part paste paniduven...

"Hey raam...its already 11.30...you will never make it to the station in this traffic...take the car and go..."
He was feeling glad that he took Anils advice..the traffic at that time was pathetic and he would have never reached city station...The traffic crawled to a halt near Silk board Junction..Humming his favourite song from the latest chartbuster..he switched on the radio..to his surprise exactly the same song was playing and at the same para as the one he was singing...his mind wandered 4 years back.

"Haiyo...Ram...you know this was the same song i was thinking of all day morning and correcta athey song they were playing today morning in cab..." and so went her chatter for the next ten mins on the plus and minus of the song...
"huh..doesnt she ever stop...someone put plaster on her mouth please..."
"raam...summa sollatha...u dont like her?"
"like her? for what? ivala kattika poravan paavam..iva pesarathaketay sevida poiduvan..anga paaru..non stopa pesara..how does she manage to find so much topic to talk??!! even news papers leave space for ads...idhuku breakay ilaya"
Anil laughed and they moved to pantry for coffee...They were both new joinees at that time and happened to stay in the same PG.Soon they became close friends and rented a house for themselves and were sharing the rooms with two other folks from their office. All the four of them were almost inseparable. Though belonging to different shifts and timings they always managed to catch up with each other and weekends were like heaven.Care free life...weeks rolled into months
and soon they all completed their first year in office. To celebrate that Anil arranged for a trip...
"Machan...invite the gals also da..it will be fun if we go as a gang..."
"dei Anil..ivan solratha kekatha...ocla jollu udarathuku trip use panikaran.."
"Ram..unakenda poraama..una oru ponu seenda maatengara..unakum oruthiya pudikathu..iva fat ava egoisticnu list poduva...nanga china pasanga enjoy panitu porom..."
"chinna pasangala..adingu....dei..ennikachum oru naal paru...evalachum vayitha thalikittu veetu vassala inga santosh irukaranu ketukitu vanthu nikka pora..anniki irukudi unaku kutchery.."
"seri seri...Ram..santosh solrathum okva thaan paduthu...muraikatha...ipo naama naalu per pona per head 1500 mela poguthu..thannilaam sekkama...neria per vantha per head cose kurayumla..."
"Anil...ipo than puriyuthu una en ivlo seekram TL aakinaanga...epa saami...enna oru calculationda..."
"ennamo ponga..seri..as usual..wake me up once u guys are done with ur bath..nethey seria thoongala...so naan kadisiya kilambaren"
"ilaati matum...somberi dog..." a pillow fell on his face and was followed by laughter..."
"Dei..dhadiya...elarum kilambiyachu..enthirichi poda...kulikalam venam..face wash panitu kilambi vaada.."
"unoda gal friends varatum..inum konja neram nan thungarennn"
"avangalam vanthu ara mani neram aguthu..seekram kelambuda..vandila thoongika..late aana veyil thaangathu machan..."
"un imsai peria imsaida..." before he could complete...in came Uma..."ada pavi..inum thungariya..bludy dog...nite shift mudichitu thungama naanga vanthirukoam..unuakenada inum thookam..kelmbuda"
Muttering something Ram started...
That was the most enjoyable and memorable trip he ever had...While coming back..they were all damn tired and everyone slept except Ram...he was watching the sceneries outside..
"enna Ravana...thoongalaya?" he turned back to hear Uma chuckling at her joke..
"Ravanana?.."
"aama..kumbagarnananuku annan maari thoongara..apo nee ravanan thana"
He smiled at the joke...
"ada..nee kuda siripia...adhisayam thaan po...cha..i missed the kodak moment..camera ilama poachu.."
"adangu...overa pesara"
"yaaru..naana...do you know whats ur nick name in office...Grumpy..."
"huh..i am close to 6 feet..and you have named me after a dwarf.."
He thought she couldnt pick the joke..and told..."Snow white n 7 dwarfs..."
"halo..engalukum theiryum...schooldaysla naan snow white playla act paniruken.."
"oh nee entha dwarf role play panna....aaah..pisasu en killina..."
"naan thaan snow white role play panen..and i am not short ok.."
"athu antha stoolenthu irangitu solu...chennai busla pona over head hand rest ettuma unaku..."
"overa pesitada..." was followed by another pinch...they started pushing each other and started laughing at their attempts...the converstaion went on...
Uma's place came first and since eveyone else was asleep...Ram got down and helped her with her bags..."Thanksda...Nee paravala..naan nenacha alavu mosam ila " smiled Uma...
"adingu...naaliku office varuvala apo pathukaren."
When he got back into the van Anil was awake..."enna machi..kadala overa..."
"ada pavi nee thungalaiya...seriana bladera antha ponu...."
"bladenu solra...past two hoursa nonstopa aratta adichitu vantheenga rendu perum...apo theirlaya..."
"machi...u know me right..enaku pudichiruntha i would have told directly...and ponungalam imsada...hi byeoda seri...athuku mela pona prachana than"
"paapoam"

Comments

Sat said…
ada paavame....innoru series-a?????
erkanave andha partha gyabagam illayo series hanuman vaal maari neendutte podhu (pls change its name to paditha gyabagam illayo! :P )....idhula aduthathu vera arambichitta...
gils said…
vaanga sat...neenga bayapadra alavukellam ila..this story mudichiten :D
gils said…
actually konjam editinglam pananum..athukulara maranthu poi..draftlenthu postiten.
G3 said…
//seekrama padichita second part paste paniduven..//

Aarambichitaaruyya.. :-((
G3 said…
//ivala kattika poravan paavam..iva pesarathaketay sevida poiduvan..anga paaru..non stopa pesara..how does she manage to find so much topic to talk??!! even news papers leave space for ads...idhuku breakay ilaya"//

ROTFL :-)) Indha dialogue-a naan adikkadi ketta maadiri irukkae ;-))
G3 said…
//"Anil...ipo than puriyuthu una en ivlo seekram TL aakinaanga...epa saami...enna oru calculationda..."//

1 yrla TL-a?? endha company raasa idhu?? namma makkals neraya per waitingla irukkaanga.. anuppi vidaren :-)
G3 said…
//"paapoam"//
Naangalum paakarom.. neenga adutha episodelayaavadhu mudikkareengalannu :P
Heidi Kris said…
part 2 pls.. but aduku munadi anda ram kadaiyoda part 10 vandruchuna unagaluku punyama pogum!
ennathithu.. mega serial maathiri, matter-e illama mudichiteenda..
ram friendsoda tour porar.. anga oru ponnoda kadala podaraar.. aana antha pen pidikalannu solraar.. appuram/?? :( :(
//..iva pesarathaketay sevida poiduvan..anga paaru..non stopa pesara..how does she manage to find so much topic to talk??!! even news papers leave space for ads...idhuku breakay ilaya//

LOL :) :).. ithu enna G3 manasula vachi ezhuthana maathiri irukku :D :D
KK said…
Seeing this post and Sat's post... rendu perume yen kitta ippo yenna seiva, ippo yenna seiva appadinu sollura maathiri theriyuthu :( chinna post'a poturukalam la :(
inoru rama? ada raama! :-) padikrom, vera edhuku irukkom!
Sat said…
KK;
post perusunradhunala adhe commenta copy paste panradha....
fun2fun said…
series a??
1st part nalla iruku... but idha vechu story enna nu infer panna mudiyala.. so, waiting for the next part!!
gils said…
//ROTFL :-)) Indha dialogue-a naan adikkadi ketta maadiri irukkae ;-)) //

hehee...athku naanga porupilla :D

//1 yrla TL-a?? endha company raasa idhu?? namma makkals neraya per waitingla irukkaanga.. anuppi vidaren :-) /
aana unga profile suit agathunga...anga no blog no orkut and no IM...heheehe
gils said…
//neenga adutha episodelayaavadhu mudikkareengalannu :P //
hehehe...rednu postla mudiyara matter illa...but third part thaan final
gils said…
// but aduku munadi anda ram kadaiyoda part 10 vandruchuna unagaluku punyama pogum!
//

LOL..sure sure

//matter-e illama mudichiteenda.. //
hahaha
adutha part padichiti solunga
gils said…
/ram friendsoda tour porar.. anga oru ponnoda kadala podaraar.. aana antha pen pidikalannu solraar//
adutha postla enna panrarnu soliruken :D

//ithu enna G3 manasula vachi ezhuthana maathiri irukku :D :D //

LOL
gils said…
//Seeing this post and Sat's post... rendu perume yen kitta ippo yenna seiva, ippo yenna seiva appadinu sollura maathiri theriyuthu :( chinna post'a poturukalam la :( //

idellam remba over..same comment in bothplace
gils said…
//inoru rama? ada raama! :-) padikrom, vera edhuku irukkom! //

LOL :D adutha postlayum raam vanthachu :D

//but idha vechu story enna nu infer panna mudiyala.. so, waiting for the next part!!
//

ur wait is over LOL :D
ZaNYChiLD said…
hey nice rite up!
very casually written!!

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