Never ending story...

Every one has a story of their own to tell....i will start a story with one line..and each of u will write next line..and the story goes/grows like tht....for each line of your story i wud pu in one line of mine....So here we go......................................

She kept staring from the window, pondering over the meeting with V, thinking where it went wrong...why he asked that question.........................

Now its your turn folks...hope it grows to a para :D..happy story telling..

Comments

Sat said…
haa...now that's something interesting ;)
But tell me, you want to increase ur blog traffic or you want to just have fun with this game>
former case, pull out a mushy...senti ....love story out of this....
Sat said…
let's see...here's my bit...
'She had met him after a long time...he was like a father to her ever since she lost hers in a war she never had anything to do with. She was really looking forward to meeting him after all these years...but when he asked her, why did she come back...she ..'
Aiyyy...naane solli kitte irundha eppadi...continue ;)
let me see how it goes from here :P
Vidya said…
LOL ! This is fun !!
I have enough drama in my life and so I am going to give this story here a wierd twist ! I will continue where Satya left off..

"She had met him after a long time...he was like a father to her ever since she lost hers in a war she never had anything to do with. She was really looking forward to meeting him after all these years...but when he asked her, why did she come back...she"

Contd by me:
" she wanted to say something sentimental, that she knows will move him. But the reality was that she kept coming to him because the pakodas that he made reminded her of her dad. But.."
sanchapanzo said…
MaryPoppins: She kept staring from the window, pondering over the meeting with V, thinking where it went wrong...why he asked that question.............

Sat:She had met him after a long time...he was like a father to her ever since she lost hers in a war she never had anything to do with. She was really looking forward to meeting him after all these years...but when he asked her, why did she come back...she

Vidya:wanted to say something sentimental, that she knows will move him. But the reality was that she kept coming to him because the pakodas that he made reminded her of her dad. But..

Sanchapanzo:Burma is not the same anymore with the military dictators striking a ban on religious symbols like pakodas(as the locals spell pagodas(British introduced this spelling)). Only if the war had allowed Japan to reign supreme over British forces ..

there goes my contribution to the already convoluted story..
any takers?
gils said…
@bucks:

:) nope..inc the blog traffic was last thing on mind..was reading a tamil novel..it was written by many people.."sangili thodar"..thot hw abt a blog like tht...n here v r :)
gils said…
hahaha..guys..u've got me now...from bakoda to pagoda...wow..engaiyooooo poiteenga....thot of making it a mushy romantic stuff..but u guys have taken it to a diff plane...well for my part..

gils:

burma..the snow covered iriyan yoma,pegu yoma and tenassarim yoma..which used to remind her of the coolness with which he handled situations...what made him change so much...why did he said those words....

epaaa...oru vazhiya pudichiten :D
oliveoyl said…
...those words were still ringing like church bells into her ears... was that a sign of something good? or bad? she was in a total state of confusion. She was both happy and sad. Happy for he had decided to be a part of the BIA(Burma Independance Army) but sad because he would be away from her...
gils said…
ada kaduvalay...politically motivateda maathareley...anyway..here we go:

she steeled herself to take the plunge and decided to meet V at the forum mall...the place where V first proposed to her....

hehehe...
oliveoyl said…
....the forum mall was a buzzing place... a place where money/time could be spent in a jiffy. She could see couples going around the mall with hands cuddled on to each other. At that point of time, she felt her loneliness pricking her and thought about the loneliness that she should facing in the future... She was lost in all this thoughts and almost forgot where she was when suddenly she felt someone pull her around by her hip which was as gentle like that of a cherry creep...
gils said…
she turned back with a surprise..only to c a small kid...which had mistaken her for its mom....how much she longed to have one of her own...


wow...oliveoyl...ipudu chudu
oliveoyl said…
She bent down kissed the kid and waved him good bye...all of a sudden she could feel the commotion around the mall... people panicking and heading towards all possible directions of the mall but keen to get away from there.... before she could sense the change, she heard a big bang...
Harish said…
For a moment she didnt knew what to do. And then she came face to face with the leader of the robbers inside the mall. She recognized those eyes.....It was.....

Continue :-)
KK said…
Her father...Whom she thought she lost in a war. She was confused and did'nt know what to do. Whether to run for her life like others in the mall or to walk upto her father and ask...

To be continued....

Gils, if your interested you can take up the tag in my blog.
gils said…
@harish: welcome :)
@kk: i dont get u..

as far the continuation..here we go...

she dint knew wat to do..was ashamed and happy at the same time...finally managed to muster courage and ....
Sat said…
And pulled up a sword from one of the hench men in her fathers gang...and joined the gang ...a la beatrix kiddo... but instead of robbinh the forum she lead the gang to the auto stand outside!!! (she knew better of course)...impressed by this feat. her father...

P.s: this is geeting more and more worse...hahahaha
gils said…
ada raama...enna oru twist..now its really tricky...

her father...who was actually an undercover agent for the burmese police..followed her hastily....

hehehee...mgr padamlaam naangalum paapoamla.. ;)
KK said…
Gils, I have tag which is similar to this post, The tag is like tagging people and continuing the story. Hope its clear now..

Story continuation....
to find that his daughter was being arrested at the auto stand under the POTA act...Seeing this he starts running frantically towards....
gils said…
oh..greatt....will chk it out...now to the story..

Seeing this he starts running frantically towards the auto.... only to find tht V at the driver seat...it was all part of a bigger plan...she boarded the auto and.........

give some name for she...
nandoo said…
and she finally woke up when her alarm rang.. it was already late for her to go to the office...
rendu naala night out adichum project issues mudinja paadu illa...

go back to office ... but she still had few traces of her dream running in her thoughts ...
nandoo said…
:D twist koduthomlaaa
gils said…
nandoo...fundoo :)
gils said…
as she boarded the auto to go to office...she saw V waiting for auto....who waved at her n joined her in auto...was tt all really a dream

eppudi :)
oliveoyl said…
but still the story is incomplete without naming our SHE!!!
gils said…
story enga mudijuthu..ipo thaana rendu per meet panraanga.. :D
oliveoyl said…
ok then i will continue reeling...

both were sitting beside each other in the back seat of the auto. As the name implies, the auto went up and down the streets in all the pits and bumps... but that did not disturb her in any way because she was already lost in the thoughts about her dream and the reality she is facing now...
Sat said…
'And just then a huge LORRY makes a sharp turn almost running into the auto...the vehicle is airborne for a minute and lands on it's side with a huge thud...it's chaos all over...blood, screams...through the blood streaming on her face she could barely see him from where she lay...All that lay ahead was ...'
Sorry you die hard romantics...I just have to have some dark element in there...there's no fun else...guess I am not letting this one go the mush away at all :D
KK said…
was a pani puri stall where she and V used to hangout often...Suddenly she notices a big black boot in front of her bleeding face...

to be continued....
oliveoyl said…
after which she could remember nothing... when she got back her conciousness, she found herself in a bed. She lay in the bed trying to recollect what had happened and why she was there...
gils said…
whoa...morbidity reigns supreme...when she woke up her dad was seated next to her...all the sequences in her dream flashed past her...and then he said those words...
gils said…
hey BUCKS(sat)...is everything fine in ur place...the news community of the world is agog with the happenings there...hope everything is safe n sound in ur place...
KK said…
May God bless you my dear...Forget whatever happened...think it was all a bad dream and forget it and start a brand new life for yourself... suddenly...
Sat said…
hey gils...it's fine in the city; just the airport that's in chaos...
ellam neram..i have a flight to take this month end..i'd better start collect polythene packets!...And worst of all i am to return to india in a little more than a month...AAANDAVA!!!
Sat said…
Almost forgot...i know when u say 'BUCKS' it is me...why the sat within '()'???!
gils said…
to b on safer side...vera yaarachum bucksnu per vachirunthaanga...Badrachala Krishanmoorthy apdinu oru blog name paathen...'Bak'knu aaidchi :D
gils said…
ethu worst of all? returning to India or d flight? ipo thaan Indian padam DVDla paathutu varen...kailaam thuru thrunguthu ;)
gils said…
kathai thodargirathu:

suddenly in came mr.V...in full mlitary attire...S as sweetly surprised...she wanted to know what the heck was happening around her when he asked her those dreaded words from her dream...." Where is the rest room"....she fainted on hearing this...

I decide to name her 'S'...and title..hmm..."It all happened one night" or "midsummers day dream" venaam shesu pear kovichupaar...ethaachum nall per sollungapa
srivats said…
let me jump in..he he..

It was dark when she woke up and she coldnt see anyone around..
she is in dark room all alone!
gils said…
antha iruttu roomla oru kuruttu poonai veruttu veruttunu thiruttuthanama paathundu irunthichi
srivats said…
She pulls herself up with great strength and looks around. There is a cupboard which has blood stained cloth hanging through the slit of the door.
gils said…
kitta poi paatha udane thana therinjuthu athu tomato sauce wipe panna hankynu...
srivats said…
since she was very very hungry she started eating it
gils said…
started eating hanky???adai..AXN pathutu vanthiya.....en heroinea kerchief saapdravala aakitiye...enna kodumaida ithu...hmmmmmm

It almost tasted like the rotis she used to prepare...but tasted better...she realised the kastams anubavichified by V and repented for making him eat her rotis...

this portion of the story is dedicated to a close friend of mine..who i call rat poison for her culinary skills...ennikachum ennaku lunch vachu (read poison) kollanumnugarathu avanga nedu naal kanavu...jerry has escaped till now :D
srivats said…
Ahaaa... ennamo nadakkudhu

I dont want to be in middle of any Tom and jerry show.

Anyway according to me the heroine eats the karchief and dies as it is a poisoned one.

The hero is a psycho, he wants her to die and he also kills himself with his latest war gun.
gils said…
aaha..enna oru kodumaiyana mudivu...maganay mega serial neriya paakaranu ninaikaren...
srivats said…
adapaavi.. i though u would still continue..

neraya fiction book padichadhellam edhukku huh?

Then there is a small cocroach comes there and eats her flesh as well as the hero's .. then after some time the cocroach is feeling some change....
gils said…
kumatuthu....p.t.saami laam neriya padipiyo?stephen king was the other guy rt? who writes this ghosts stuff..?
Known Stranger said…
this didnt go well. i foudn the same way n another blogger page - it was very perfect.

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