Maalai pozhuthin mayakkathiley

Busukkaga wait pannum boathu ethirpaakamal kidaikum lift..ethaiyo thedi kondirukoam boathu kidaikum siru vayathu pokkisham...athai pol thaan intha kirukalum...hard disk clean pannum boathu maatithu...enniko oru naal kootam illatha 29c Busla ekku thappa wordsa poatu manasukkula ezhuthinathu...konjam recall panni korthu vitruken...padichitu commentunga...



kaalai kathiravan kanalena sutterikka
kannukul kanniyaval sinthanai siragadikka
karpanai kuthiraiyil kanavulagil naan midhakka
kanaa kanden thozhi

sevvidhazhil thenamudhu sinthanaiyil thithikka
oorrukku kaavalena velvizhigal melirukka
unakkay sonthem yena udhadugal uchharika
kanaa kanden thozhi

irudhyathil neeyena irummapudan naan sirikka
irudhyamay naan yena punmuruval nee pookka
manallaka vanthu vinnalantha vithaganaai
kanaa kanden thozhi

kaaanum idamellam neeyananaan kalipura
kaanatha idthilum yenai kanbathai ne koora
kanni un ganniyathai kaanboar viyanthida
kanaa kanden thozhi

vidinthathu vizhithidu yena vizhithavar yenai ezhuppa
vilithatthu neeyana viyapiley naan vizhikka
kalainthathu kanaa...........

Comments

oliveoyl said…
I have already read this one of yours some 2 yrs back.... good one :-)
gils said…
yeah :) suthama maranthiten ithai pathi...inki ethaiyo thedum boathu maatithu :)
Has to be me said…
super-ah irruku! edhuku oru tunenum pottu oru nalla patta padalam! ;)
gils said…
!! :) tune...yosikatha angle...interesting
Syam said…
summa irundha sangu.....tune vera poda solraanga...

nalla thaan osichu irukeenga.. :-)
gils said…
:) namma prithz vittu paada solidalaam...hahaha..avangaluku nalla punishment
KK said…
Hey Gils! naanum athe than ninaichen...Prithz'a pada sollitu...miruthangam by Venkatesh...
Aamam athu yenna kadaisi line...oru thirukural touch irukku...Yetho thuppi thuppi oru kural iruke...yenakku nyavagam illai...
G3 said…
Paravaa illa.. Nallavae irukku kavithai.. And title adha vida apta irukku..
//vilithatthu neeyana viyapiley naan vizhikka
kalainthathu kanaa........... //

Naduvula oru line sollaama vittuteengalae? Ezhuppinadhu 29c bus conductor dhaana?
Janani said…
Kalakiteenga ponga...Poem nana thaan irukku...Enga sutathu nu thaan theriyala.....:-)
gils said…
@kk:
prithz bcna..neenga thaan singanum...neenga esc aaitey irukeenga...post tt long pending song :)

@g3:
modern mangaatha...nakkal naayagiya irukeenga :D

@janani:

Varugaikum tharugaikum nanri...aiyo...sontha sarakunga..sutathu illai...naan ennamo mandabathila irukara sivaji kitentha sutunu vantha mathiri solreengala :) konjam vasana nadaiya iruku..sokka sokka... :D
KK said…
ba ba ba ba... :)
Has to be me said…
Gils,
Yosichacha? Sirkirum oru nalla paatu release agatum! Iduku male version & female version num irrukatum! Male version courtesy KK & female version courtesy can be Prithz! :)
gils said…
:) seriyaanaa theerpu frm naatamai has to be me :D
gils said…
KK..enna paada sonna rajini padam perlaam solreenga...athuvum pazhaiya padam...nyayapadi ra ra nusolirukanum :D
ambi said…
thanglishla kavithai padikka kashtamaa irukku,
ethukum one more time will try out and drop u again. :)
gils said…
ambi.thangalishtathukku...padikka thaan thanglish :D
G3 said…
Hello, Oru friendly request.. Indha per sootum vizhavellam blogoda niruthikkonga.. Orkutla pottu maanatha vaangaadheenga.. Enga makkal paathaanganna.. adhukkappuram naan gaali.. :(
gils said…
:) ipdi oru disclaimer poataprumum summ irukka mduiyuma.. attaaaaccckkkk
G3 said…
Grrrrr... Poyum poyum unga kitta sonnaenae.. Appo seri naanum attackkukku ready.. Oru kai paathudalaam.. Unga scrap bookaiyum unga friends paapaanga illa :p
G3 said…
Grr... Attack dhaan unga mudiva.. Appo naanum ready... Pathudalaam oru kai... ;p
KK said…
Has to be me and Gils - Naan Prithz kooda padina oorla irukiravangalam yenna thedi vanthu adipanga...Prithz sooper'a paaduranga...appadi irukum bothu yethukku paatu nadula oru kazhutha satham???

G3 - yean? oru kai mattum paarkireenga?? yeppo paarthalum saaptute iruntha innoru kaiya yeppadi parkurathu?? :)
gils said…
@g3:
:) naanga ready neenga readya...merey paas syam hein..kk hein...santosh hein...tumhare pass kya hein... :D

@kk:

intha kadhailaam venaam..paadrathunna paadrathu...enna naan solrathu ;)
oliveoyl said…
chey G3 pavam... yen maanatha vangaringa yellarum sendhu...
gils said…
enna kootaniya.. :D
KK said…
neenga yenna sollurathunu yenna keta?? yenakku yeppadi theriyum? ;)
gils said…
ada athu crazy mohan's marriage made in saloonla vara dialogue. :D
ennanu solrathu...Paadrathunna padrathu :D nyabagam varutha?
G3 said…
KK : //yeppo paarthalum saaptute iruntha//
Naan enakkagava saapidaren.. kalyana saapada miss pandrennu feel panneengalaenu ungalukkum sethu dhaanae sapidaren :p

Oliveoyl : Thanks for your support.. Appada.. enakku support pannavum indha ulagathula oruthar irukkangappa.. :)) Nandri Nandri..

Gils : Syamum KKvum vena unga pakkam irukkalaam.. Santhosh unga pakkam kedayaadhu.. Appadi thappi thavari avan unga pakkam support panna en kitta irundhu eppadi thaakukdhal varumnu avanukku nallavae theriyum.. so unga countla oruthar kammi.. :p
gils said…
paapoam...u've drawn d battlelines...now be prepared ;)
G3 said…
Battlela win panna endha kottaya kudukka poreengannu sollunga.. Urupadaadha kottaikkellam naanga dhandama sanda podaradhilla.. :p
gils said…
ithu veraya..ok...may the force be with u :D
KK said…
Sabash! seriyana poti...
gils said…
halo...neenga namma katchi..enna veerappa mathiri dialogue udreenga
oliveoyl said…
thats the power... koodiya seekaram yellarum yenga katchi
Usha said…
kakka kakka kanagavel kakka
nokka nokka nodiyil nokka

enna mannan style-la ka ka ka potte kavidhai ezhudirukeenga? good one, though!
gils said…
@Oliveoyl:
kilmbitaangaiya kilmbitaangaiya..ingaiyum "arasi"yala..hmmm..

@KC:
ahaha...kuttichaathan...sashtikavasamlaam soluthu...hmm...bayangara bakthimaana irukay :)....ka is the easiest of words to use in poems.summa suthi utta..naalu vaartha thaana maatum.. :)
Kanya said…
gils...

athu enna ezhuthurathunnu aachu.. azhaga thamizh'la ezhuthalaame... thanglish'la thatti irukeenga...

but its good... innum niraiya ezhuthunga... kavithai ellam its an art of expression.. athukku varthaigalai choose panrathuthaan azhage... innum different'aana words pottu ithaiye innum azhagakka mudiyum....

keep writting.... but thamizh thatta try pannunga...
gils said…
:)...planning to...seekrama ellathaiyum tamzihla maathiruven..thanks 4 d fdbck
Rahul Gupta said…
what language is this??
I couldnt understand it.


http://rahulsparadise.blogspot.com/
gils said…
its a mix of tamil n english dude

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