Maaruvathu Manam

Vazhakkathai vida satru athiga decibelil kaetta Ammavoda voice woke Ram up from sleep.
"Ennama prachanai..kaalangaathala en ipdi sound udra?"
"Unakennada poachu...artha raathiri..pisaasu mathiri 2 manikum 3 manikum vantu adichi poata mathiri thoongida vendiathu. Veetla enna nadakuthu poguthunu konjamaachum akkara iruka"
"akkara irukatum..konjam sakkara thookala oru coffee pleassee"
"coffelaam kedayathu"
"Yen?"
"Kitchen sinka poi paaru" nu solitu amms stormed off.
Thooka kalakathoda Ram goes to kitchen. Sink sink aagara stagela irunthichi.
"amma...Kitchen cabinet ipolaam sink typela varuthaa enna? en irukara pathiramlam athula poatu vachiruka?"
"Antha kadanagaari rendu naala velaiku varala. Namma veedu thavira micha per ellar veetukum poiruka inga matum varala. Kekarathuku munnadiye coffee.saapaadunu poatu..kekarapolaam kaasum kudukaren paaru..athan. Ithu ilicha vaai. Epo venumnalum varalam polam onum solaathungara thairiam. Erkanavay marunthu selavuku vaangitu pona kasaiye inum thirupi tharala. Inniki matum varaama irukatum. Avaluku iruku" endru porumi thallinaal amma.
"Amma..oru naal varalangarathukaga sandai potena aprum vera velaikari vara varaikum nee thaan kashtapaduva. Konjam porumaiya iru. Naan venumna athu vantha stricta solli vakren."
"Aammaa..nee nadurathiri moonu maniku vara varaikum ava wait pannuva paru. Inniki iruku avaluku" endru karuvi konday ullay sendraal amma.

****
"Vara vara ammaku kovam jaasthia varuthu" endraan Ram
"Unna mathiri thollai pillaiya porantha kovam varama enna varum" endru nakkaladithaal Uma.
"Overa pesatha. Oru naal ila oru naal enga veetuku nee vanthu thaana aganum. Apo paakren nee epdi manage panrenu"
"Athelaam naanga pathukarom. Jokes apart. avangalukum vayasaguthulla. Velaikari varalangarathu project deliverable anniki escalation varatha vida peria matter. Athelaam ungala mathiri pasangaluku puriavay puriathu. Enga veetla enga amma rudra thaandavamay aaduvaanga. Enakum semm paatu vizhum. Athelaam this earla vaangi that earla viturrathoda seri"
"Paravalaye ipovay maamiyaruku parinji pesara...pozhachuppa nee. Seri naaliku naan leave. Ipovay soliten aprum en solalanu enna paduthaatha."
"Enna thideernu leave?"
"Chumma..bore adichithu. Erkanavay egapatta comp offs unclaimeda iruku. Ethuku wastea viduvaanennu thaan."
"Dog. Firstay enkita solirunthenna i would've also taken off"
"Un imsailenthu oru naalachum escape aalamnu thaan intha planay..aaah...killaatha"
****
"Ammaaaa...thaaayeeee"
"Iruda...varen" endru kashtapatu ezhunthu thooka kalakathodu kathavai thirantaal amma.
"Saniyanae...varathay nadu jaamathula...ithula enda ipdi vera kooptu en maanatha vaangara"
"hehehe..."
"Enna iniki seekrama vanta?"
"Amma ithu unakay overa therila..mani 11.45 aaguthu"
"Usuala 2 maniku mela thaana varuva athaan konjam thoongalamaynu kanna moodinen..correcta vanta..seri po..lunch boxa sinkla podu..shoeva kazhatti standla vai..socksa thooki washing machinela podu" endru kattalaigalai sara maariyaga poatu thaakinaal amma.
"Emma..nadu rathiri kuda epdi order maarama athanaiyum list panra"
"Romba mukiam..fridgela rose milk poatu vachiruken..kudichitu paduthuko"
Kitchenukul nuzhaintha Ram gaali sinkai paathu "Enma..iniki nee thaan elathaiyum clean pannia? antha lady vanthucha ilaya?"
"Paavamda ava. Paiyonda school admissionukaga queuela mani kanakka ninnu oru manika vantha. Paakavay paavama irunthichi. saapdrathuku saatham poatu anupi viten. Naaliku seekrama vanthirenu soliruka. koluthara veyilla ninnutu inga vanthu paathriramlam theikanumna kashtam thaana. Avalum manushi thaana. Pona pogatumnu Bus ku kaasu kuduthu anupi viten"

Ram went to sleep with the happy feeling that "No wonder my mom is the most loved lady in the neighbourhood".


P.S: Idea behind this little attempt of a story is to spare a thought for the unorganised sector and the vast discrepancy and the benefits enjoyed by the organised one.

Comments

ambulisamma said…
ppastu!!
idhula edhavadhu sondha sarakku irukka(uma n ram),polambals and sadham pottu anupparadhu ellam padikkarache,enga ammava pathi ezhuthi irukkara madhiri thonithu.
RamMmm said…
Oye kadhai master, nalla kadhai ezhudhareengo. Humorous!!!

Everything revolves around the 'kadangaari' at parents' place. :) Big ticket kadan vera vechchundu regularaa varaama paduththo paduththu paduththara.

// "Ammaaaa...thaaayeeee"

ROFL. Inspired by real life?
Ramesh said…
Nice one gils. Ipadi kuda kathai ezhthuveengal thalaivare ?

Intha kadahai oda hero RamMmmmmmmmm aa ??
G3 said…
Aapicer 1st and last matter i the know.. middle mattera mattum marachitteengalae :((( Unga baga open panni unga permission illama bookka edutha andha ammani dhan umava ;))))))
ram returns a? :))) as always kalakal kadhai!
Aaarti said…
Ahaa.. ithu etho Ram kathai mathiri illiye.. etho matter... unmaiya sollunga!!:P

pavam mommy.. ippadi paduthareenga..[kathaila sonein...]. atha rathri vandu samayal pana vekarathu, muzhichittu waiting... ithellam solpa too muchu...hhehehe

Hey G3- eppadi irukkeenga?? oh naan VTV thirumba pathein..hehe..friend 2nd half pakalainnu thirumba izhuthundu ponan... sema comedy.. with english sub titles...hahaha
chennaigirl said…
Sontha kathai soga kathaiyoo...Irunthaalum romba nalla irukku :)
R-ambam said…
amma thaye! LOL

ellam seri, y this uma in the story ? suspense kaa?

good story !
TheUncanny said…
Uma is Gil's muse!!!

Engalam Ram irukuraro ums-vum irupaanga!!!!...

Ram-->gils
Uma-->???
Matangi Mawley said…
incident almost found everywhere.. good work!
Anonymous said…
Ahaa G3, ippo thaan unga comment padichein...

yaaru saar antha Uma.... hehehe..no escape ippo..matineeengala!!
lostworld said…
I don't talk in madras bashai, but if I have to borrow a word, I'd say - Pinnita gils!!! :):) Keep the stories coming.
Swetha Guptha said…
ha ha a typical reflection of the day to day story!!!!Nice narration

Have u seen the 'Marie ' biscuit ad abt the regular attendance of the maid...real life'le yum avange regulara vandha "dream come true" dhan.
Annam said…
ithu unnoda story thaana...
RamMmm said…
Somehow I keep reading the title as "maruththuva" manam. yaennu theriyalai.

@Ramesh - Ayyo, adhu naan illai saar. Ennoda online avatarukku munnaalaendhey gils avarai/Umavai use pannuraar.

@G3 - Unmaiya neenga sollunga. gils onnum solla maataengaraar. mazhuppal paervazhi. verum peedigaiyaa poduraar.
very natural very relevant and very connectable piece.. amma nyabagam vardu :(
gils said…
//idhula edhavadhu sondha sarakku irukka//

uma ram thavira michamelam nejam :D

//enga ammava pathi ezhuthi irukkara madhiri thonithu.//

i think mukkavasi ammakaloda voice ithu :)
gils said…
@KB:
:)) hws u?

@rammmmmmm:

//Everything revolves around the 'kadangaari' at parents' place. :) Big ticket kadan vera vechchundu regularaa varaama paduththo paduththu paduththara.
//

ejjatlee...most of my stories..not more thn 4 5 characters...athuku mela pona..i wl forget the flow :D :D heheehe..saart term memaree laas u c:D
gils said…
//Inspired by real life?//
:D :D :D athey athey :D

//Intha kadahai oda hero RamMmmmmmmmm aa ??//

intha ram is a rep for every guy inthe planet :D:D
gils said…
//Unga baga open panni unga permission illama bookka edutha andha ammani dhan umava //

Unga nyabgathula idi uzha grrrrrr...

//ram returns a? :))) //

yup..inimay raamo raam thaan :D
gils said…
/pavam mommy.. ippadi paduthareenga..[kathaila sonein...]. atha rathri vandu samayal pana vekarathu, muzhichittu waiting... ithellam solpa too muchu...hhehehe
/

:) avangalay inum konja naalula enaku vera oorla vela vangi kuduthu nee kelambu raasanu solida poranga :D
gils said…
//sema comedy.. with english sub titles...hahaha//

theterlaye subtitlesa??!!! konjam overa irukay
gils said…
//Sontha kathai soga kathaiyoo...Irunthaalum romba nalla irukku :)//

mikka nanni hai :)

//ellam seri, y this uma in the story ? suspense kaa? //

ada raam thanaku thaanay pesara mathiri poata nallarukathula..athaan..kuda pechu thonaiku oru phigur :D
gils said…
//Uma is Gil's muse!!!

Engalam Ram irukuraro ums-vum irupaanga!!!!...//

:) ithu kuda nallathaan iruku :D
gils said…
//incident almost found everywhere.. good work!//

enga manager podra comment mathirye irukunga :) unga pera epdinga pronunce panrathu? maathangi mavalay na?? ambulis amma nu oruthanga irukanga..mathangai magal!!! aduthu m.kumaran son of mahalakshmi nu oruthar varuvar nenakren :D :D aio saaami..tharma adi uzharathuku munna i the escaapeeeeeee
gils said…
//yaaru saar antha Uma.... hehehe..no escape ippo..matineeengala!!//

intha anony naan ila..apo vera yaru/.?? rt??
gils said…
//I don't talk in madras bashai, but if I have to borrow a word, I'd say - Pinnita gils!!! :):) //

LOL :D :D mikka nanni hai

//Have u seen the 'Marie ' biscuit ad abt the regular attendance of the maid...real life'le yum avange regulara vandha "dream come true" dhan//

ilayae..pakala...wl chk :)
gils said…
//ithu unnoda story thaana...//
pikaaali..nee oru scientistnu adikadi prove panra :)

//Somehow I keep reading the title as "maruththuva" manam. yaennu theriyalai./

LOL ..aaruvathu sinam..mathiri maaruvathu manam nu vachiruken title..inimay set aidum nenakren ungaluku
gils said…
//Ennoda online avatarukku munnaalaendhey gils avarai/Umavai use pannuraar.//

yes..and unga perukum en kathai ram ku neria 'M' difference vera irukay :D

// amma nyabagam vardu :(//

oru vijit intha pakkam vantu porathu
gils said…
LOL :D :D kathaioda P.S parta yarumay pakala nenakren :D pinna 3 mani neram kathi kuthu vettu nu katha solitu..kadisila slide podrachay say no to non violencenu bittu news podra mathiri themea oru linea poata ipdi thaanu solreengala :D athuvum vaasthavam thaan :D
Aaarti said…
btw, PS is the best part of the post... :D
G3 said…
//Aaarti said...
btw, PS is the best part of the post... :D
//

Kanna pinnavena repeatae :D
ambulisamma said…
Uma.va pathi G3 edho solla varaanga,pls sollidunga.
Orthanga pudhusa vandha ipdiya kalaikkaradhu,paavam,apdiye enna vera ottareenga,neenga gils,lolls,jols appidinu pear vechu irukkeenga naanga edhavadhu sonnama?
Anonymous said…
@rt n ggg:

:D

@ambulimaama:

usuala intha narathar velai naan thaan pannuven..ipo neenga take overa..enga vambula maati udreenga..naan paatuku sivanaynu iruken..oru pacha manna ipdi sikki udrele ithu ungalukay nannarukka

(dei pesarathelam pesitu ipdi oru dialoga nulaam kekapdaathu :D )
gils said…
ambulimaama:
enga enna vambula maati udreenga..i the gud baai
ambulisamma said…
@ anon: naan ambulimaama illa,ambulisamma,neenga yaarunnu theriyalaiye.
chay g3 neenga koodava thappa kuppadareenga,indha ulagam romba polladhadhu.
vambu illainga,valaiulagam therinchuka vendiya vishayamachennu parthen,r8 topic closed.
G3 said…
@Ambulisamma,

Andha anony comment saatchaath gilsae dhaan.. somberi no.1 avaru.. login panna somberithanapattu pala blogla (including avarodadhu) ippadi thaan anonya mukkadu pottutu suthittiruppaar :))

Naan eppo ungala thappa kooptennu enakku therilayae :(((

Hehe.. avaroda umava pathi sollanuma illa umakkala pathi sollanuma??? Avar dhaan periya listae vechirukkarae ;)))))

P.S. Gils.. ungalukku kalyaanamaanadhum unga wifekku indha comment ellam kandippa neenga kaattanum :P
gils said…
// naan ambulimaama illa,ambulisamma,neenga yaarunnu theriyalaiye//

ennai nanraaga parunga...utru paarungal...inuma yaarnu therila :D :D gils thaanga :D login panna sombala irunthichi :d so anonya suthitrunthen :)
gils said…
/vambu illainga,valaiulagam therinchuka vendiya vishayamachennu parthen,r8 topic closed.//

:D :D neenga rombbbbbbaaaaa nalllaaavangala irukeengalay :D

//Andha anony comment saatchaath gilsae dhaan.. somberi no.1 avaru.. login panna somberithanapattu pala blogla (including avarodadhu) ippadi thaan anonya mukkadu pottutu suthittiruppaar :))
//

ahemm..yarupa anga..intha kosu tholla thaanga mudilapa..ethachum marunthdinga mudhalla
gils said…
//Gils.. ungalukku kalyaanamaanadhum unga wifekku indha comment ellam kandippa neenga kaattanum :P//

blogspot servera crash panitu than maru vela
ambulisamma said…
@ g3: manichukkonga,adhu ezhuthu plus karuthu pizhai.

@ gils: anon.aha alaiyaradhu ellam oru pozhappa?
Anonymous said…
//@ gils: anon.aha alaiyaradhu ellam oru pozhappa?//

apdiye DD akka mathirye pesareenga :) DD akka is another blogger..not sure if u know her
lakshmi said…
intha mokka post ku 43 commentsa nu partha... athula 40 unga comments thaan...

appa naan nenaikra mathiri blog readers manguni manthiringa kedaiyathu..
lakshmi said…
after looooong time me reading everyones blog.. again Ram n Uma va.... aiyayoooooo.... naan again apeeeeeeeetu

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