Another attempt at 55 fiction

Crowded market place.
Ram and Uma are standing in front of a vegetable shop.
Uma as usual arguing with the shopkeeper over the prices.
All of a sudden, out of nowhere, a tall guy lunges at Ram with a huge sickle.

"CUT...good shot. Lets packup for the day" shouts the Director on the megaphone.

Comments

aargggggggggggghhhhhhhhh.. call this mokkai bits.. dont call it 55er..
Annam said…
nanna irukku:)))
RamMmm said…
Ayyayyo Gils, I don't think you are going to leave your moniker "Ram". Inching close to (my) reality. I am not an actor though. :-)

Twist at the end 55er. Not bad though.
athivas said…
Gils,emi?????
@AJCL: All his writings are mokkai bits,let's call these 55mokkais :D
athivas said…
peraiyaavathu maathunga,please,same 3lettersla vera name
G3 said…
//Ram and Uma are//

Literalla thalaila adichikitten indha pera paathu :((( Paavampa ram um uma vum mannichu vitrunga :((

//lunges//
//sickle//

Idhellam neenga normala use pandra words kedayaadhae.. enga irundhu g3 panneenga :P
@g3- actually gils has a lot of these hidden words in his secret stash vocabulary that he appo appo avuthuvidafies..
u will know of them through the comments he leaves on others blogs..
soin said…
mokkai.. neenga poi serial yedunga..free
R-ambam said…
suttufied from tamil cinema s.. nu solra mathiri irukku ..

but ok for 55 fiction, vegetable market cud have replaced with some bigger deal :))
gils said…
//call this mokkai bits.. dont call it 55er../

hhehehee :D unga reaction patha vishamam panra chotuva potu saatha ready irukarapo irukara epect varuthu...glad tht me no where near sgp :D

//nanna irukku:)))//

!!! pikaali ennachu unaku??? epolenhu ivlo nallavala maarina?
gils said…
// I don't think you are going to leave your moniker "Ram".//

uhummm..chaancela :D

// Inching close to (my) reality. I am not an actor though. :-)//

oh unga wife per uma va?? :)
gils said…
//ils,emi?????
@AJCL: All his writings are mokkai bits,let's call these 55mokkais :D//

hehehe....ithukuda nallathaan iruku :D

//peraiyaavathu maathunga,please,same 3lettersla vera name//

hmm..apdingareenga...seri matiruvom :)
gils said…
//Literalla thalaila adichikitten indha pera paathu :((( Paavampa ram um uma vum mannichu vitrunga :((//

ithenna aniyayama iruku ...oru manushan..20 yearsa..maadhu cheenu jaanki mythilinu katha solitrukaru...naan oru 2 varushama Ram uma kathai solren..ithuku ivlo edirpa...Oh myy gaaaad...waatta sothanai to gils...!!!
gils said…
//
//lunges//
//sickle//

Idhellam neenga normala use pandra words kedayaadhae.. enga irundhu g3 panneenga :P//

ubayam swaram :) avangalukagavay all englees wordsa potu katha sollings :)
gils said…
//ctually gils has a lot of these hidden words in his secret stash vocabulary that he appo appo avuthuvidafies..//

avvvvvvvvvvvv...unga paasathuku oru alavay ilya :))))) nanri nanri

//mokkai.. neenga poi serial yedunga..free//

hehhehe..soringa opicer
gils said…
//suttufied from tamil cinema s.. nu solra mathiri irukku ..

but ok for 55 fiction, vegetable market cud have replaced with some bigger deal :))/

hmmm..adutha mokkiala try panren
kanagu said…
ithu mathiri neraiya padichachu na.. director cut solrathu...
Swaram said…
Nice shot :P Nalla irukku ;) ;)
Vidya said…
LOL!! I love this 55 word story! I am going to try that!
Carpe Diem said…
Gills kalakuringa..super nalla irunthuchu
Srivats said…
aargggggggggggghhhhhhhhh.. call this mokkai bits.. dont call it 55er..


LOL
Srivats said…
actually not bad da :P
gils said…
//ithu mathiri neraiya padichachu na.. director cut solrathu...//

:D one more to the list then :D

//Nice shot :P Nalla irukku ;) ;)/

vaare va :)

//LOL!! I love this 55 word story! I am going to try that!//

:D aaha..ithu nalla irukay..waiting for ur version :)
gils said…
//Gills kalakuringa..super nalla irunthuchu//

ohh thank u carpe :) u also try na

//actually not bad da :P//

hehehe nanri
gils said…
//good one :) INCENDIO//
huh,,me ran out of charms.. :D
Divyapriya said…
அந்த director யாருங்க? நீங்க தான? ராம் னு பேர் வச்சாலே கண்டிப்பா நீங்களா தான் இருப்பீங்க ;)
Divyapriya said…
//G3 said...
//Ram and Uma are//

Literalla thalaila adichikitten indha pera paathu :((( Paavampa ram um uma vum mannichu vitrunga :((//

அப்படி சொல்லுங்க G3...உலகத்துல எத்தன பேர் இருக்குது? நானெல்லாம் கதைக்கு பேர் வைக்கறதுக்கு எம்புட்டு யோசிக்கறேன்...நீங்க மட்டும் ஒரே பேரா ஜாலியா யூஸ் பண்றத ஒத்துக்க முடியாது...இது அலுமிணி ஆட்டம் :)
gils said…
//அப்படி சொல்லுங்க G3...உலகத்துல எத்தன பேர் இருக்குது? நானெல்லாம் கதைக்கு பேர் வைக்கறதுக்கு எம்புட்டு யோசிக்கறேன்//

alo ungalthulam sankar maniratnam padam mathiri..neria yosichi set panreenga..enthu local dramanga :) intha naalu peray porum :)
Vishnu said…
agha.. marubadiyum aval madiri.. marubadiyum mokka.. aanalum nalla dan irundhadhu..

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