55 fiction

I the also trying...romba kushtamappa..history exam mathiri vala valanu kathai solrathu kooda OB adichirlaam pola..naalu varila kathai solrathukulla nora thalluthu!! Here goes...

He pressed the gun on his temple.

His trembling fingers crawling towards trigger.

Beads of sweat, formed a beeline over his eyebrows.


He closed his eyes and pulled..."Raammm....close that novel and go to sleep.

Remember, you have school tommorow" shrieked Mom.

Comments

athivas said…
LOL!! Honestly, a good try!

You are always the mokkai you,aren't you??
athivas said…
By the way,gils, never, ever think of giving up blogging. We'll miss our doses of laugh once a while!! :) :)
awesome first attempt.. herez to many many more.. please keep the mokkai quotient alive, no one quite does it like u..
and all ur story protagonists have Ram as their name na, irrespective of age..
Srivats said…
wow super da :) but raam and kanauvu is age old mokkai. :)
Aaarti said…
hmmm... novel, gun, school.. hmmm.. engerundu inspiration vandudunnu yosikarein :D

naanum try pananum..
Swaram said…
I the pls need translationsu for those Tamil linesu :P

Superru attemptu :P All Moms r same na che ;)

/*and all ur story protagonists have Ram as their name na, irrespective of age..*/

Gud one Appu ;)
kanagu said…
nice one anna... :)

itha paatha etho real life experience maari irukku... ;)
athivas said…
@Swaram:Translation:
//I the also trying...romba kushtamappa..history exam mathiri vala valanu kathai solrathu kooda OB adichirlaam pola..naalu varila kathai solrathukulla nora thalluthu!!//

I am also trying, but it is v difficult. Looks like,It's easier to manage with a long history exam-like post, but to put it in 4 lines, is v difficult(actually meaning of nora thalluthu: bubbles pushing :P)
Swaram said…
Superb translation Savi :) U always come to my rescue!

Gils the author, pls help me till I become well-versed in Tamil :P
Aaarti said…
chk out what i wrote... :D

http://wordsfloweasy.blogspot.com/2009/10/55er.html
R-ambam said…
gud one ! but i dont get the title .
G3 said…
//"Raammm....close that novel and go to sleep.//

Raam-la 2 A irukkae.. appo idhu namma singai natchathira photographer raama ;)
Vishnu said…
55 fictioniliyum mokkaiya??
but was nice.. neenga kanavoda better ah mokka podalam.. continue pannunga..
gils said…
//You are always the mokkai you,aren't you??//

:) athey athey :D

//never, ever think of giving up blogging. We'll miss our doses of laugh once a while!! :) :)/

sontha selavula sooniyamnu ithai thaan tiruvalluvar solirukar
gils said…
//awesome first attempt.. herez to many many more.. please keep the mokkai quotient alive, no one quite does it like u..//

itha padichitu ggg pallavaram malailenthu gudhika try pannatha kelvi paten :D :D


//and all ur story protagonists have Ram as their name na, irrespective of age../

type adika athaanga vasathia iruku..en character namelaam max moonu letterku mela vaikratha ila..koperunchozhannu per vaikanumnu aasaia thaan iruku..kathaiya vida per perusa irukaynu paya pullaiga pheel pannum..athaan :D
gils said…
//but raam and kanauvu is age old mokkai//

??kanavu?? kanavu engada vanthuchi?

//novel, gun, school.. hmmm.. engerundu inspiration vandudunnu yosikarein :D//

elam daily newspaperlenthu thaan!!
gils said…
//I the pls need translationsu for those Tamil linesu //

sureu :D

/itha paatha etho real life experience maari irukku... ;)//

lighta :D
gils said…
//I the also trying...romba kushtamappa..history exam mathiri vala valanu kathai solrathu kooda OB adichirlaam pola..naalu varila kathai solrathukulla nora thalluthu!!//

I am also trying, but it is v difficult. Looks like,It's easier to manage with a long history exam-like post, but to put it in 4 lines, is v difficult(actually meaning of nora thalluthu: bubbles pushing :P)//


ROTFL :D :D mailasaami oru padathula tamizh to tamizh translate panuvan..athu pola iruku :D :D
gils said…
//Gils the author, pls help me till I become well-versed in Tamil :P//

ooops..i am writing one 5 part story..with lot of tamil dialogs :D guess athivasi wl have a rollicking time translating for u
gils said…
@rt:
chky comentiachu :D

//but i dont get the title //

athu oru kaampetishunga..55 wordsla story
gils said…
//Raam-la 2 A irukkae.. appo idhu namma singai natchathira photographer raama ;)//

ila..athu sathama koopdraanga..athaan :)

//55 fictioniliyum mokkaiya??
but was nice.. neenga kanavoda better ah mokka podalam.. continue pannunga..//

sooraaha
RamMmm said…
Gils is reading books-o-books and so book references increasing.

@R-ambam
>> gud one ! but i dont get the title.

55 word piece of fiction.
gils said…
:))) unga perla katha ezhutharakaga pheel aagaleye?
That was a good one! liked it! :))
*PETRIFICUS TOTALUS* (you are caught now, you cannot escape) :D
gils said…
//That was a good one! liked it! :))
*PETRIFICUS TOTALUS* (you are caught now, you cannot escape) :D//

hehehe..i had already apparated to ur blog :D missed again..taa.nana..taanaaa
Annam said…
pidiyungal vaazhthukalai...gilsu ethanai pera neenga kathai ezhutha vacheeteenga athuku......

remba jooperuuuuuu 55
Annam said…
epdi gilsu ipadi yosiching....enakum konjoondu solli thaanga ...fees g3 tharuvaanga:)
gils said…
/gilsu ethanai pera neenga kathai ezhutha vacheeteenga athuku......//

??pikaali? seri mabba!!! vaazthulaam telling!! dankies :)

//fees g3 tharuvaanga:)//

avangalaa!! aaniye pudunga venaam saami!!!
Annam said…
vaazthulaam telling!! /////////

pinna 55 words use panni oru story ezhuthurathu enna sathaarna vishayama:) athuku thaan me polinjing vaazhthtu mazai ...naanum postla try panna aarambichin:)))))aana oothikichu
Annam said…
??pikaali? //////////////////

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr......
gils said…
//naanum postla try panna aarambichin:)))))aana oothikich//

try try :) set agum
there are death eaters waiting for you at my blog ;) the next time you visit you will get caught :D

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