Lord of the Rings

"kabhi kabhi aditi..." endru cellphone sinunga...fone eduthu paathan Ram.
"Pudu numbera irukay..yara irukum"nu yosithavaray..
"Hello"
"Ennada..oru santhega thonila hello solra" endarathu murumaniyil iruntha kural.
Yara irukumngara ennam manasinul inum vegama oda, konja neram yosithaan.
"dei..naanthaanda..Suresh pesaren..fonea veetlaye vachitenda..inniki office vara late aagum..damager kita solidu..."
"neethaana...seri seri..solidren..seekram vanthu seru" endru satru kaduppudan fonei vaithuvitu..vazhakkam pola chat windowai open panni velailiyil busy
aanan Ram.
Satru nerathilellam..meendum azhaipoli ketu fonei paarthan.
Veetilirunthu fone.
Vazhakkam pola Ammavoda kelvi kanaigaluku thayar panikitu fonei eduthan
"Hello"
"Enda ipdi kadupoda fonei edukara..konjam kuda pasamay ilada unaku.." endru adutha anju nimishathuku vidama polambina ammavoda kuraigalai porumaiya kettu kondan. Vazhakkam pola "ozhunga sapdu..kuli..pal theyee" endru to do listoda amma than sitruraiyai mudithu kolla...mazhai penju ointha effectil fonei perumoochodu vaithan.
Kizhay vaitha adutha nodi meendum sinungiaythu fone.
"Ennada ithu..iniki non stopa calls varuthay"nu aacharyathoda numberai paathan.
"Hiiii Uma..."
"Enna first ringlaye fonea eduthita..adisayama iruku.."
"ila..ippo than pesitu fonea vachen..udanay un call vanthucha..athan"
"oh..disturb panren solriya..naan vaikaren fonea.."
"aiayao..naan apdi enga sonen.."
"apo nan una disturb panalaya...adapavi..nethu avlo dialogue vitta.."
"aaha...ithenada vamba poachu..enna sonalum thappa eduthukaraye"
"aama..nan lusu..nee ena sonalum enaku thappa than thonum...naan fonei vaikaren.."
"heyy..wait wait..en kovapadra...seri..evening epo meet panrathu"
"en meet pananum..athan naan elalthiyum thappa eduthukarennu soniye..nee righta yosikaravanga kudavay iru"
Sila pala kenjal konjalgaluku piragu oru mari samalichu appointmenta confirm panni fonei vaithan.
"cha..iniki naalay seri ila...poi oru tea adichitu vanthu than velaya arambikanum"nu decide pani kelamba pogayil..meendu fone.
"hello"
"Hello sir..we are calling from dubaakoor bank..you are one of the several million lucky customers to get selected for our..."
Kadupudan callai cut seithan Ram.
Silent modela fonei maatri vitu office edhiril iruntha tea kadaiku senran.
Suda suda Tea cuppai vaangugaiyil..thideernu shock adichathu pola dance aadi..pathi teaya kaila kotikitu..avasaram avasaramaga fonei eduthan.
Vibrating modela vachathu maranthu pona kadupum..kothika kothika tea mela kotinda erichaloda fonea eduthu
"Helloo"
".."
marumuniayil..sirithu nera mounathiruku piragu.."Ram..you free for a minute?"
"aaaha..damager call...romba kathitomo"nu thinkinavaray.."yes sir..no sir...sorry sir" nu kana kaanum kaalangal PT peeli sivamai mari ninran.
"If you are free..can you join the meeting now..we are waiting for you in 2-18"
"tho vanten..."nu solli mudikumun call cut seiya patathu.
Iduku enna archanai vanganumonu yosichikitay..50 roobai noteai neetinan.
"saar..chilara kudunga sar"
Irukara pocket elathiyum theeviravathia thedra police kanakka valai veesi thediyum oru 50 paisa kammia than thetha mudinjathu.
"3.50 kuda change ilama..ivanukelam..ivlo pocket vacha pant oru kedaa"nu kadupudan mugathai thirupi kondan kadaikaran.
2-18 room enga irukumnu ini thedanumaynu..arakka parakka odi liftin mun ninraan.
Peak hour pallavanai pola jampackagi vanthu ninra liftil foot board prayaaniyai thotrikondu nirkaiyil...meendum fone sinungiathu.
"Vibratingla thaana vachom..aprum epdi ringtone satham kekuthu"nu yosikarapo..arugil nindravan "hello" endru pesa thodanga..appo thaan realise seithan...
than foeni tea kadaiyileye vituvitu vanthathai.

Comments

G3 said…
Over tensionla pogudho aapis [;)]
mgnithi said…
//vaithuvitu..vazhakkam pola chat windowai open panni velailiyil busy
aanan Ram.//

//3.50 kuda change ilama..ivanukelam..ivlo pocket vacha pant oru kedaa"//

:-)

//"hello" endru pesa thodanga..appo thaan realise seithan...
than foeni tea kadaiyileye vituvitu vanthathai.//

Thalai.. ippa enna karuthu solla vareenga..
Preethe said…
Sondha kadhaiya?

chat window open panni avvalavu busya work panna mudiyuma?? 6 yrsla idhu theriyama pochchee!!
R-ambam said…
Enakku oru santhegam....oru nimisham ...
paper eduthukaraein... paena eduthukarein ....

ippo sollunga,

neenga verum Lord aa ? illa lord labakku daasaa?
gils said…
@ggg:
//Over tensionla pogudho aapis [;)]//
nalla keteenga ponga

@nidhi:
//Thalai.. ippa enna karuthu solla vareenga..//

karuthu ennana...arakka parakka paadupatu..padukka pai illa.. :D velangicha?
gils said…
@preethee:
//Sondha kadhaiya?//
nondha kadhainga :D

//chat window open panni avvalavu busya work panna mudiyuma?? 6 yrsla idhu theriyama pochchee!!//

ada naanga 6 varushama itha thaana full timea panitrukom :D

@rambam:
//neenga verum Lord aa ? illa lord labakku daasaa?//
ipdi tuffa out of syllabus kostin keta epdi..naalu option kudunga..
Usha said…
kadhai blog-a maariducha idhu ;) aama, mudiva enna solla vara nee kadhaila? oru phone vache oru kadhai ezhudara tillalangadi expert aana unaku kodanu kodi namaskaram ;)
rsubras said…
dadada dadada.....

enna oru arumaiyana kathai....... chanceh illa gilsu.. :)

Lord of the rings by Gils navudane... naan nichayam aana ponnu thanakku engagement ring potta king ah than apadi refer pannutho nu ninaichen.. aana ithu vera ring ah irukkum nu naan konjam kooda ninaichu paarkala :)
Divya said…
semaya iruku flow of writing,
oru fone vaichundu kathaiyey develop paniteengley Gils, superuuuuu:)))
gils said…
@kuttichathan:
//kadhai blog-a maariducha idhu ;) aama, mudiva enna solla vara nee kadhaila?//
kadha adikarathukaga thana kadaiye open panirukom :D

@subunna:
//naan nichayam aana ponnu thanakku engagement ring potta king ah than apadi refer pannutho nu ninaichen..//
ungalku nichayam aadicha..sooper gangarujilebilations

@divs:
:D fone pesarapo enaku vara comments vachu thethinathu than intha ishtory..naan pesarachay..epdi pesinalum edachum comment varum....samayathula intha fonea thalaya suthi thooki podnum polarukum...atheye kathai akiten.. :)
Deepa J said…
Hey! A very good piece of writing. Simply enjoyed it. But a small suggestion, when you are writing Tamil, why dont you use tamil fonts? reading tamizh in English is a little difficult.
gils said…
yeah..i shd actually try that :) but lazzzzzzzy... :)

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