Anbenra mazhaiyile

"Amma..late aaguthu...naan kilambaren...breakfastlaam unna evan ipo panna sonaan...its already 7...cab miss aana longu longunu vandila poganum...sonna kekariya...unna evan kaalangaathala idellam seyya solraan..".....Ram as usual avan archanayai aarambithaan..
Ram..S/w engineer..indha kaalathu pasangalukkay uriya impatience alavillama irukaravan..
"Konjam wait pannuda...Sun music paakarachay time aanathu therilaya...ipo ennamo kaala venneer kotinda mathiri parakariye..." ...usual dialogue from Amma..
Avasara avasarama saaptutu...office caba pudika odinaan Ram..
*Ding Dong...Ding Dong...*
"Ivlo early morning yaaaruda athu .Ram ethayachum maranthu poitu return vantano" enru ninaithavaray Amma kadhavai thiranthaal..."hey...Geethava...aathukaararum vanthirukara...Vaango Vaango...romba naal kazhichi iniki thaan vara vazhi therinjutha...athaiyaa latchanama marumagaloda functionuku oru vaaram munnadiye varuvannu paatha...ipdi guest mathiri variye..."
"illama...neramay ozhiyala...ivaruku vera udambu sarila..."
"oh..ada paavamay..enna achu...."
"heart problem...ipo strict medicationla irukarathala konjam paravala...naakai katti vachiruken...vitta kandatha saaptu intha mathiri udamba keduthukarar..."
"nalla paathukoma..un pullayaandan epdi irukaan...avan poonal poathu paathathu...idey oorla irukan..oru ettu vanthu chithi epdi irukaanu kekarathilla..."
"nee verama...engaltiye avan seriya pesarathilla...naanga avanta pesiya naalagauthu...eppa paaru office..office vitu vantha internetnu ukkanthuraan...pesa kooda neramilla intha kaalathu pasangaluku.."
"nalla sonna po...seri..rendu perum konjam rest eduthukungo...neenga kulichitu varathukulla..saapadu ready panidren..."
***
12.30 PM

Fone ringing...
"Halo..amma naan Ram pesaren..."
"Soluda...ena vishayam...ipo thaan padukalaamnu ponen...Geetha athailaam vanthirukada.."
"adellam irukatum...saaptiya? maathara potundiya....?"
"ennada.. yen kadu kadungara.....epapaaaru marunthu maatharanu doctor mathiri pesara..."
"emma..chinna kuzhandha mathiri adam pudikara...ozhunga maruntha saapduna kekariya..aprum..kai vali kaal valinu nee thaana avasatha padra..."
"naan thaana avastha pada poren...patutu poren..."
Kadupil fonai vaikiraal amma..idaiyellam kettavaray Geetha amarthukondu irukiraal.

***
6.00 PM

Fone ringing...
"Amma...Ram pesaren...iniki evening friends kooda velila poren..dinner angeye saaptukaren..nee wait panna venam seekram saaptru..appa enga?"
"vaasalla pakkathu veetu kuzhandhaiyoda konjindu irukaa..."
"emma udamabu sarilantu rest eduka vendi thaana...antha kutti yaanai kashku moshknu irukum..atha thooki vachindu roadla ninu kai valika porathu...sonna ketta thaana...en ipdi rendu perum adam pudikareenga" enru erinthu vizhunthaan Ram..
"enda...bore adikuthunu solitu ipo thaan velila pona...nee en kovapadra...vara vara unaku suthama porumaiye illama poachu..."

***
Next day morning..."hey Ram...solratha keluda...5 mins..rava upma ready aaidum..saaptu poda.....poitaana....konjamachum solratha madikarana paaren..koopda koopda ennu kekaama poraan...."
"seri..neenga tension aagatheengo...eveninga kadaiku polam..." enru Geetha samadhana paduthi senraal..
***

"Engamma..poiruntha..madhiyanam fone panen..yarum edukaliye...velila pona solitu poga koodatha"..ena kovathudan Fonil ketaan Ram...
"aamam..apdiye solrathellam kekariyaakum...nan,appa athai ellam jewellery shopuku poirunthoam..."
"kaalailiye theriyumla..solitu pona enna...fone edukalaina udanay bayanthuten...enna vaaanginda"
"enaku onum vaangikala...athai thaan necklace vaanginda..nalla gaathrama irukku.."
"en..unaken panjapaada..neeyum vaangika vendi thaana...evlo vanthalum en intha kanja budhi una vitu poga maatenguthu..."
"thirumbavum aarambichitiya...veetuku vaa pesikalam" enru fonea kizhe vaithal amma..

"Paathiya Geetha...thaliku mela valanthuta mariyathangarathay ilama poiduthu...epdi eduthernju pesaraan paar...konjam kooda paasamgarathey illa ivan kitta..en kitta mattum illa appa kitayum ipdi than...ennana enna avlo thaan pechu...pesama mudiyor illam poidlamaanu kooda thonuthu...ivanuku oru kalyanam pani vachitu kasi rameswaramnu poida poren.." enru amma pulambinaal..
"nanaum rendu naala paathundu thaanma iruken..neenga thaan thappa purinjindu irukel..."
"neeyum avanuku sappa kattu katriya...eppo fone pannalum erinji erinji vizharaan...ideallam pullaya"

"illama...nalla notice panitu thaan solren...kaalaila saapda kooda time illama arakka parakka office ponalum...nee saptiyanu daily fone panraan par..avanuka paasam ilanu solra...kadaiku ponenu sonna udanay nee vangindiyanu thaana first ketaan, enaku enna vaanginanu kekara pasanga mathiri illama...night nee wait panna poriyennu fone panni...saapda varailnu solraaney..idha porupunu sollama enna solrathu...en kovapadraanu paar...nee nerathuku marunthu saapda matengara...appa weight thooka venaamna keka matengaray udambuku vanthirumonu kavala...unaku onum vaangika matengara...kashtapata kalathila seri...ipo nilama nalla irukarapovum ipdiye irukiyengara aadhangam.....idellam thaan enaku Ram kita theriyuthu...office vela pressurela kooda marakkam fone panni nee epdi irukanu visaarikaaran..ipdi oru nalla paiyan kidaika nee kuduthu vachirukanum..."

Geetha sonnathaiyellam mounamaga ketukondiruntha amma..."sariya sonna Geetha...idelaam unaku puriyanumnu thaan nana kovapadra mathiri nadichen...un paiyan aniki enga veetuku vanthu nee avana seriya purinjikarathey illainu solli varuthapatundu irunthan...avanum en paiyan mathiri thaan Geetha...idelaam naana soli unaku puriyaruthuku badila neeya realise pananumnu thaan ipdi kovapadra mathiriyum complaint panra mathiriyum panen....thappa ninachukatha..."

Geetha mugathil E aadavillai...

Comments

G3 said…
First comment!!! appuram dhaan padips :D
G3 said…
//sariya sonna Geetha.......thappa ninachukatha...//
Paleernu aranja unarvu :) Eppavumae aduthavanga vishayathula porumaiya yosikkara naama namma vishayathula mattum appadi pandradhillannu theliva solliteenga :) Kalakkals :)

Enna aachu? dhideernu orey posta pottu kalakkareenga? oppicela romba freeya vuttutaangalo? ;)

Innikku chennai return illa.. unga b'day kondaada ;) advance wishes :P
gils said…
:) unga kadamai unavakanda mei silirkuthu
உண்மையிலே இந்த கால பசங்களோட பாசத்தை நல்லா சொல்லி இருக்கீங்க கில்ஸ்..

கதையோட்டமும், அதை சொல்லி இருந்த நேர்த்தியும் அழகா இருந்தது படிக்க.. காட்சிகளை சின்ன சின்னதா சொன்னாலும் கடைசில ஒண்ணு சேர்த்த விதத்துல உங்க திறமை பளிச்சிட்டது கில்ஸ்..
Arunkumar said…
oru naalaiku onna gils?
kalakkunga

i really liked the story. was telling to myself why this mom reacts so wierd. understood later :)

good flow. nalla irukku. tamilla eludi irunda innum nalla irundurkumnu ninaikiren..

@karthik
correcta sonninga.

good job gils... namma katchi makkal new year-la orey kalakkals ponga :)

//
unga b'day kondaada ;) advance wishes :P
//
sollave illaye gils.. Have a blast on your (b)day !!!
enna gils nan vanda than ninga varuvingla?
KK said…
Daily onna???
AVP :)
G3 said…
@KK : //Daily onna???//
kettuteengala.. avlo dhaan.. pongal leavekku porennu aduthu konja naal upscond aayiduvaaru :P

pona postla Matter ennanu ellarum kekka aarambicha effectaam indha avasara padhivu.. ungala divert pandraaraamaam.. vitraadheenga ;)***** Narayana Narayana *****
Heidi Kris said…
wow kalakal post. Sema twistu at the last. Oliver twistye thothuduchu ponga :P

apram oru chinna doubt. Geetha attai na, how will Geetha's son call the Amma character Chitti? slighta confuse ayiten anda edathula, wont it become maami. Or it is like calling maami as chitti because other kids at home call maami as chitti (Cos i do that to my maamis. I call them chitti coz my cousins do that) And coincidence pathengana even I have a attai named Geeta :D

And lol at G3 commentu. Btw advance bday wishes ngradhu Maatu pongal kagava illati nejamave ungaloda bday falling in the near future?. Eduva irundaalum Advance Bday wishes :D
prithz said…
Agaaaaaa!!!! so many points to note in this post gils - andha relationship matter la konjam heidi kris maadiri yeanankum confusion :D....and also.. pooona post la poota comments ku laam reply panna time illa.. aaana, ivalo periya new post poda time irunthudho?
prithz said…
ram peru paatha vodane oru nyabagam varuthu.. poona varusham edho ram gra perula oru mega serial u started.. wat happened to it? :P
Nice characters :)
All were positive characters :) thts a gr8 deal :)

Even Geetha's charcter was taken in a good flow :) Gr8 work!
Karthik B.S. said…
eppadi ivalo chinna postu poda mudiyudhu ungalala? padichut varen!
gils said…
@mk:
danku danku..i wanted to tell it differently....love in disguise of anger..athaan yosicha theme...but it came out differently...avlo azhuthama solla porumai illa..
gils said…
@arun:
ada...g3 thannoda bdayva nammalodathunu solli kondadraanga...avanga nalla enatha purinjiknga...azhga komubula paint adichi ribon kati...maina...varushathku firsta kulichi...chancela ponga
gils said…
@kedi:
vanga vanga...apdila ilenga...konja nala kadai adikarathula bc :D thirumba micha blog digvijayam start pannanum :)
gils said…
@kk:
AVP=avlo vetti???expansion for the last part enna?

@g3:
//vitraadheenga ;)***** Narayana Narayana *****
//
unga thondum nengalum vaazhga (**NARa NARA teeth biting**)
gils said…
@heidi:
//Geetha attai na, how will Geetha's son call the Amma character Chitti? //
onnu solata kelvi kekarathu romba ec..badil soli parunga *LOL* readit like 5tricks kamal...well...intha aboorva ragangal questionku enakum answer therila..kuthumadipa chithinu poatuuten...maami athai yaranirunthalum ok... :D
and u shd wish G3..avanga bdayku en postla poatutanga :D
gils said…
@prithz:
oi..complan..pona post all comment replied..chk madi..
//ram peru paatha vodane oru nyabagam varuthu//
adu padicha nayabgam ila paartha nyabgam :D wait wait...nex aduthaan..unless something else eatsup the space...intha varusham oru story writing spreela iruken :D
gils said…
@pons:
vaanga vaanga...unga karuthuku nanri :)

@bsk:
//eppadi ivalo chinna postu poda mudiyudhu ungalala//
LOL...kadhaila muzhugiteengala..sounday kaanum? :D
SKM said…
superb!romba chinna postdhan.
KK said…
Gils, AVP na Appalika Vanthu Padikuren...
Padichuten... Super'a irunthuchu Gils.... Naan ithe maathiri oru topic yosichutu iruken... innum correct'a set aagala... Was a nice read... padika padika paravasam... post pannite irunga...
Priya said…
romba nalla irukku gils. thamizh font la ezhudhina easy ya irukkum padikka (thamizh theriyumo??)

//eppa paaru office..office vitu vantha internetnu ukkanthuraan...pesa kooda neramilla intha kaalathu pasangaluku.//
correct. Veetla irukkaravanga kitta kooda nerla pesaradha vida phone la dhan niraya pesa mudiyudhu. Adhukkaga pasam illanu artham kidayadhunu azhaga solli irukkinga.
gils said…
@skm:
skm means sk mommy rt?? enna nethu antha pakkam vanthapo sk was posting... :D unga dual role soooperapu
gils said…
@kk:
adicha kaipullaye ipdina adivaanginavan!!...ipdi yethi vittay..... :)

@pri:
internet matter hits closer to heart for many? :D btw...ENakku tamizh theriyumava...peterakkaku namla pathi therila...abi dekho...chooopisthaanu....
Karthik B.S. said…
Yeppa Gils, ippo dhaan kadhaya full'ah padichen... sema gripping'ah irundhudhu!

//nee saptiyanu daily fone panraan par..avanuka paasam ilanu solra...kadaiku ponenu sonna udanay nee vangindiyanu thaana first ketaan, enaku enna vaanginanu kekara pasanga mathiri illama...night nee wait panna poriyennu fone panni...saapda varailnu solraaney..idha porupunu sollama enna solrathu...//

innanee saptiyanu daily fone panraan par..avanuka paasam ilanu solra...kadaiku ponenu sonna udanay nee vangindiyanu thaana first ketaan, enaku enna vaanginanu kekara pasanga mathiri illama...night nee wait panna poriyennu fone panni...saapda varailnu solraaney..idha porupunu sollama enna solrathu...//

chancey illa andha pullayandan. :D Inna oru paasam. :)
Karthik B.S. said…
andha Geetha'vukku seruppaala adicha madhri irundhurkum pola! :)

Idhu neengale ezhudhuneengala Gils? Appadi Irundha neenga greatu! Chancey illa!
gils said…
@bsk:
:Doru vazhiya last line vanteengala..gud gud...:D ungalaukaaga oru 5 part podalaamnu paathen...will try next time :D :D
yes yes...own writings...mandapathula yaarum tharala :D :D ivlo okkai sotrya kadan vera vaanganuma
Anonymous said…
Gills man,
I can smell the "Mylapore Manvaasanai" in these sort of your your short (??) posts..anyway a bit lengthy..but worth reading..

Ravusuparty Ramnath
gils said…
:D hey nee epoda padikara:) start posting man
My days(Gops) said…
hi first time here....thru thru.....

ennamo solla vareeenganu therinchadhu, adha nallavey soneenga. ivangalukku thaan solla vareenganu paarthaa, neenga avangala sollitu, ivangalukku sollaaam solliteeenga....
gr8...

idhuku innoru artham thaan "give and take policy'O ? nice nice :))
gils said…
@mydays:
velgum velgum...naan sollavanthathu kidakatum neenga enna sollavareenganay purila :D
oliveoyl said…
good one gils....un kadha herova romba nallavannu (read this in vadivelu style)sollitangaya!!!
My days(Gops) said…
nijamaavey purialai'a?
ramya said…
hey really indha kaalathu pasangaloda luv n affxn pathi azhaga miga arpudhama sollirukeenga gils..

tat too avan jewellery shop poitu vandhomnu amma sonnadhuku solra reply, phonela tablet eduthundiyanu ketkaradhu ellam really romba caringa irundhuchu..gud post pa.
KK said…
//adicha kaipullaye ipdina adivaanginavan!!...ipdi yethi vittay..... :)//
purilaba.....
Syam said…
gils enna oru sentiment,twist kalakkal kadhai ponga... :-)
Syam said…
@g3,

ithu paarthaavathu appo appo nalla post podunga :-)
Syam said…
////adicha kaipullaye ipdina adivaanginavan!!...ipdi yethi vittay..... :)//
purilaba..... //

@KK,

athu vadivelu kaamedy... :-)
gils said…
@olive:
andha character namma ellarukumay porunthum :)

@gops:
summa sonnen...ollalaolaayiku...
gils said…
@ramya:
danku danku....

@kk:
ennangathu...namma thalaivar..va va sanga aayutkaala president punchuu dialogue epdi marakallaam neenga..winnerla varumla..
gils said…
@notaamai:

danku danku...
//ithu paarthaavathu appo appo nalla post podunga :-) //

pullarikkavachiteenga..idukku mela solla vaartheye illa... :D :D
Venkatesh said…
hello gils: kadai super.. characters ellam nalla portrait panni irukeenga..

amam, pona postu padichen, adulua ellorum kaeta kelviku neenga ennum answer pannave ellaye??

nanum en pankuku kaetudaren.. enna samacharam?? etho something something madri theriyudu??
G3 said…
//ithu paarthaavathu appo appo nalla post podunga :-) //

hehe.. naanellam nalla post poda aarambichitta appuram ulagam azhinjidum.. appadi oru asambaavidham nadandhuda koodaadheyngara oru nallennathula dhaan naan OB posta podaren.. indha unmaiya purinjikaama ellarum naakku mela palla pottu pesareengalae :(
gils said…
@venky:
ada something something illenga...nothing nothing...summa over buildup udraanga...konjam vasanama pesinen ambuttuthan..
gils said…
@g3:
ungaluku naaku naalu muzhamnu olagathukay theriyum..it wud be easier for u to talk with pallu on ur naaku..enalukukelaam kashtamungoov :D :D
KK said…
//ennangathu...namma thalaivar..va va sanga aayutkaala president punchuu dialogue epdi marakallaam neenga..winnerla varumla..//
Winner padamnu therinchuthu... namma thalaivar padam marakamudiyuma... inga yen vanthuchunu than puriyala :)

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