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Dostana - part 1

P.S: This is a story by a friend of mine with hosting rights given to me :D I've split it into 3 parts as it was quite big..here we go :) njoy the story and feedback your comments :)

Friday, February 13, 2009, Friday
08:00 pm

"Chadthi Jawani..." blared the stereo. The gongs struck 8 in Vijay’s sub-conscious mind. He had never needed an alarm to wake up for dinner - Anand always took care of that. No sooner would Anand enter home after work, than he would switch on the damn radio. Snuggling deeper into the sheets, Vijay tried to ignore the music which had now risen to intolerable volumes.

“Don’t you want to shave, take a shower, and grab a bite and leave? You don’t have much time, dude and Preeti despises late-comers, remember” piped Anand from the shower.

Getting up from his bed, Vijay grabbed the towel and ambled on towards the other bathroom. Looking into the mirror, he reflected silently on the events of the afternoon. He had returned from work for a lil early today due to a bad headache and was checking mail for the last time before his siesta, was surprised to see a mail from Preeti. She recently got promoted as a Manager and was leaving to Mumbai for good. With her folks settled in Mumbai and growth in career, she was very much excited to get back there. All it said was

“Dear Pumpkin,
Its my last weekend tomorrow in Bangalore – in case you didn’t realize.
Wanna meet you @ 11 in the Valentines’ Day Special Concert by Aditya Kumar @ Firangi Paani.
Love,
Plum”

Aware that the evening might not transpire into anything remotely romantic, he had very reluctantly agreed to join her. Now, on second thoughts, he wasn’t so sure it had been a great idea. For one, he knew he still didn’t have it in him to bare his heart to her and more importantly he has this strange fear that something awful was going to happen that day.

“Hey Anand, I don’t think I should go.”

“You moron, this could be your last chance to tell her. You have been Preeti’s friend, philosopher and guide for 4 years. Need I remind that it was precisely this date that you broke off with Divya 7 years back. You’ve waited long buddy. Just go get her.”

Tidily decked in an ironed, dark green shirt (Preeti’s favorite color for a man) and reeking of expensive CK perfume, Vijay pulled his car out of his basement and set off to go.But on the way,he saw the DVD rental shop and stopped by. Got a few CD’s and went back home to watch Bergman’s Wild Strawberries. An hour into the movie, Vijay changed his mind and decided to go to Firangi Paani after all.

Comments

G3 said…
Me the firstae :))))
G3 said…
y this murder veri? orae parta poda vendiyadhu dhaanae.. atleast part parta pirichalum konjam periya parta poda vendiyadhu dhaanae.. ippadi oru scenea ellam oru parta podaradhu selladhu :(
andha oru scene kooda pumpkin ku plum ezhudina love note..! enna koduma idhu gils? btw, sondha anubavatha ipdi friend kadhai nu evlo naal thaan uttalakkadi? :P
KK said…
kadai arambikurathukku munnadi part mudinchiduche??? haiyo haiyo... :D
KK said…
yaarunga antha kannadi pota ammani??? ada namma porkodi :D

Welgum back!!
R-ambam said…
romba different aa irukku intha story :p cant wait to read the next part ..
Divyapriya said…
நல்லா இருக்கு கதை...அப்புறம் என்ன ஆச்சு? மரியாதையா சீக்கரம் அடுத்த பகுதி போடுà®™்க...சில கல்நெஞ்சக்காà®° ப்ளாகர்ஸ் (என்னையுà®®் சேத்து தான் ;) à®®ாதிà®°ி அடுத்த வாà®°à®®் வரைக்குà®®் காக்க வைக்காதீà®™்க :)
sri said…
Nalla erukku da..Too short for a epsisodnnu thonudhu da :)
sri said…
Seekram podu wait panren :)
Annam said…
vanthutennnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Gils sir
Annam said…
kandippa post padichu thaan comment podanuma
gils said…
//y this murder veri? orae parta poda vendiyadhu dhaanae.. // heheehe..summa oru buildupu thaan...itha counter panna ending semma mokkia potruvomla :D
gils said…
hey porks...vaanga vaanga :) // btw, sondha anubavatha ipdi friend kadhai nu evlo naal thaan uttalakkadi? :// enga vantha uadnayva....ennnn intha kola veri...

// btw, sondha anubavatha ipdi friend kadhai nu evlo naal thaan uttalakkadi? ://

haahah..saga...ithukay ipdina..ending paatha 10sun aaiduveenga nenakren
gils said…
//yaarunga antha kannadi pota ammani??? ada namma porkodi :D//

LOL :D :D

@rambam:

//romba different aa irukku intha story :p cant wait to read the next part ..//

:))) potaachu potaachu
gils said…
//மரியாதையா சீக்கரம் அடுத்த பகுதி போடுà®™்க...//

potaachu potachu.

//சில கல்நெஞ்சக்காà®° ப்ளாகர்ஸ் (என்னையுà®®் சேத்து தான் ;) à®®ாதிà®°ி அடுத்த வாà®°à®®் வரைக்குà®®் காக்க வைக்காதீà®™்க//

LOL :D soringa opicer

//Too short for a epsisodnnu thonudhu da :)//

ijit...maybe..seria edit panala nenakren..adutha aprt paaru :D
gils said…
//vanthutennnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Gils sir//

avvvvvv...en en en intha kolaveri ungaluku!!!
Carpe Diem said…
nalla velai itha naan first a padikala illana enakum suspense vaichu irupingale :P.
dubukudisciple said…
btw, sondha anubavatha ipdi friend kadhai nu evlo naal thaan uttalakkadi? :P
///
idai naan vazhi mozhigiren gilsu

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