Another attempt at 55 fiction
Crowded market place.
Ram and Uma are standing in front of a vegetable shop.
Uma as usual arguing with the shopkeeper over the prices.
All of a sudden, out of nowhere, a tall guy lunges at Ram with a huge sickle.
"CUT...good shot. Lets packup for the day" shouts the Director on the megaphone.
Ram and Uma are standing in front of a vegetable shop.
Uma as usual arguing with the shopkeeper over the prices.
All of a sudden, out of nowhere, a tall guy lunges at Ram with a huge sickle.
"CUT...good shot. Lets packup for the day" shouts the Director on the megaphone.
Comments
Twist at the end 55er. Not bad though.
@AJCL: All his writings are mokkai bits,let's call these 55mokkais :D
Literalla thalaila adichikitten indha pera paathu :((( Paavampa ram um uma vum mannichu vitrunga :((
//lunges//
//sickle//
Idhellam neenga normala use pandra words kedayaadhae.. enga irundhu g3 panneenga :P
but ok for 55 fiction, vegetable market cud have replaced with some bigger deal :))
hhehehee :D unga reaction patha vishamam panra chotuva potu saatha ready irukarapo irukara epect varuthu...glad tht me no where near sgp :D
//nanna irukku:)))//
!!! pikaali ennachu unaku??? epolenhu ivlo nallavala maarina?
uhummm..chaancela :D
// Inching close to (my) reality. I am not an actor though. :-)//
oh unga wife per uma va?? :)
@AJCL: All his writings are mokkai bits,let's call these 55mokkais :D//
hehehe....ithukuda nallathaan iruku :D
//peraiyaavathu maathunga,please,same 3lettersla vera name//
hmm..apdingareenga...seri matiruvom :)
ithenna aniyayama iruku ...oru manushan..20 yearsa..maadhu cheenu jaanki mythilinu katha solitrukaru...naan oru 2 varushama Ram uma kathai solren..ithuku ivlo edirpa...Oh myy gaaaad...waatta sothanai to gils...!!!
//lunges//
//sickle//
Idhellam neenga normala use pandra words kedayaadhae.. enga irundhu g3 panneenga :P//
ubayam swaram :) avangalukagavay all englees wordsa potu katha sollings :)
avvvvvvvvvvvv...unga paasathuku oru alavay ilya :))))) nanri nanri
//mokkai.. neenga poi serial yedunga..free//
hehhehe..soringa opicer
but ok for 55 fiction, vegetable market cud have replaced with some bigger deal :))/
hmmm..adutha mokkiala try panren
LOL
:D one more to the list then :D
//Nice shot :P Nalla irukku ;) ;)/
vaare va :)
//LOL!! I love this 55 word story! I am going to try that!//
:D aaha..ithu nalla irukay..waiting for ur version :)
ohh thank u carpe :) u also try na
//actually not bad da :P//
hehehe nanri
huh,,me ran out of charms.. :D
//Ram and Uma are//
Literalla thalaila adichikitten indha pera paathu :((( Paavampa ram um uma vum mannichu vitrunga :((//
அப்படி சொல்லுà®™்க G3...உலகத்துல எத்தன பேà®°் இருக்குது? நானெல்லாà®®் கதைக்கு பேà®°் வைக்கறதுக்கு எம்புட்டு யோசிக்கறேன்...நீà®™்க மட்டுà®®் à®’à®°ே பேà®°ா ஜாலியா யூஸ் பண்றத ஒத்துக்க à®®ுடியாது...இது அலுà®®ிணி ஆட்டம் :)
alo ungalthulam sankar maniratnam padam mathiri..neria yosichi set panreenga..enthu local dramanga :) intha naalu peray porum :)